|Reviews for Harry Potter and the Butterfly Effect|
| TARDISbluu chapter 8 . 9/15/2013
(For chapter 8)
Ah, so they didn't kill Pettigrew. Interesting. Oh, and by the way, you misspelled the Malfoy's name every time in this chapter, by adding an "r," making it "Malfroy." Just thought I'd let you know. :)
I do hope that getting a bunch of reviews from one person isn't annoying, to you... but, like I said, I like to review stories that I like a lot, so...
| TARDISbluu chapter 2 . 9/15/2013
(For Chapter 2)
Hm... Except Peter WASN'T escaping unpunished... They did just say they suspected that he was taken by the Death Eaters not to be rescued, but killed. Officially, or rather, legally, no, he wasn't punished, but I think it's fairly safe to say that he was punished pretty well at the hands of the Death Eaters. At least from what I (and in turn, they) know right now.
| TARDISbluu chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
(for chapter 1)
Promising so far. There's something not quite identifiable that is just slightly off in the speed of the story, but it's so slight I don't think it's really anything to worry that much about. It's probably just my perfectionist streak showing through. :)
Fairly good characterization. That's always nice to see in a work of fan fiction, as not many can do it.
Hopefully it won't annoy you, but I'm probably going to review every few chapters... I love to review stories that are good. I know with my stuff, it seems like if people don't review, then it's like it wasn't worth the effort, to them, so it must not have been all that great. So I like to make sure help other people to know when they have a good story. :)
| Guest chapter 20 . 5/25/2013
Um.. Harry becomes a horcrux when his mom and dad are killed on Halloween . He was the only thing that the fragment of Voldemorts soul could latch down on... It's in the books. So yea... Anyways I love the story
| Trucker chapter 11 . 5/21/2013
I found this story only yesterday. I've enjoyed it and plan to read all of it. I'm sorry you've encountered some trolls. They have no idea how to give a positive, helpful critique. They are ignorant bullies. Ignore them and they'll eventually tire of your failure to give them your attention and move on.
| gryphonsson chapter 20 . 4/28/2013
Er, I kind of got the impression that the Horcrux in Harry's forehead formed on the night his parents died, not at the Cedric incident.
| sylvelle chapter 23 . 2/20/2013
Nope prefer the other ending. Harry needs a happily everafter with Sirius in it.
| sylvelle chapter 13 . 2/20/2013
Actually I was rather pleased you didn't go that way, I always felt Harry's involvement was rather contrived. I mean he is only 14 and he didn't enter his name so why does he have to be involved. Or if he was bound to then make it 3 short little test and then draw again.
anyway I like this way.
| mworth1019 chapter 23 . 1/6/2013
good ending of a great read...
| elijahlover chapter 22 . 1/3/2013
I love it soooooo much but George why? Xxxz
| Svenion chapter 20 . 11/2/2012
so that's now 3 times that people have accepted gifts from strangers... wouldn't harry have been a little more cautious after the chocolate incident? and who assumes that they received a gift when there's nary a holiday to be found?
| Cass chapter 23 . 10/14/2012
Wow. This was amazing! I've been looking for a fic like this for ages, but none have ever been quite right - but this was perfect. My only critique is that Harry was a bit OOC... But not overly so (It was bearable, unlike some other fics I've read recently...) You really got the others right though - especially Sirius. And I love how much you stressed that while Sirius had loved James, it didn't mean that he saw Harry as James. He loves as for being Harry, not for being a mini version of his best friend. It's (in my opinion) something that should have been included a little more in the books. Anyway, fantastic job :)
PS- your non-horcrux ending made me cry! I loved it, it's something that I had never even considered, even when imagining the end with Sirius alive. I admire your originality and ability to think outside the box while still making the story work.
| reader chapter 13 . 10/4/2012
(The arrival of the other Schools happens as in the book. Same with Fred and George trying to put their names in the Goblet.)
I'm so glad you just summarize these bits like this. It's awful to reread the books, unaltered, in fic. ;-)
| Nayeli Clearwater chapter 23 . 9/8/2012
| Guest chapter 22 . 8/18/2012
Your One and Only Wish
Do it one by one, don't look ahead!
1. Write the name of a person of the opposite sex.
2. Which is your favorite color out of red, black, blue, and green, yellow?
3. Your first initial?
4. Your month of birth?
5. Which color do you like more, black or white?
6. Name of a person of the same sex as yours.
7. Your favorite number?
8. Do you like California or Florida more?
9. Do you like the lake or the ocean more?
10. Write down a wish (a realistic one).
Are you done?
If so, scroll down
1. You are completely in love with this person.
2. If you choose:
Red: You are alert and your life is full of love.
Black: You are conservative and aggressive.
Green: Your soul is relaxed and you are laid back.
Blue: You are spontaneous and love kisses and affection from the ones you love.
Yellow: You are a very happy person and give good advice to those who are down.
3. If you’re initial is:
A-K: You have a lot of love and friendships in your life.
L-R: You try to enjoy life to the maximum and your love life is soon to blossom.
S-Z: You like to help others and your future love life looks very good.
4. If you were born in:
Jan.-Mar.: The year will go very well for you and you will discover that you fall in love with someone totally unexpected.
Apr.-June: You will have a strong love relationship that will not last long but the memories will last forever.
July-Sept.: You will have a great year and will experience a major life changing experience for the good.
Oct.-Dec.: Your love life will not be too great, but eventually you will find your soul mate.
5. If you choose...
Black: Your life will take on a different direction; it will seem hard at the time but will be the best thing for you, and you will be glad for the change.
White: You will have a friend who completely confides in you and would do
Anything for you, but you may not realize it.
6. This person is your best friend.
7. This is how many close friends you have in a lifetime.
8. If you chose...
California: You like adventure.
Florida: You are a laidback person.
9. If you chose...
Lake: You are loyal to your friends and your love. And you are very reserved.
Ocean: You are spontaneous and like to please people.
10. This wish will come true only if you RE-POST THIS BULLETIN in one hour and it will come true before your next birthday!
3rd times the charms right?