Reviews for The 25 Game
vlaovic chapter 7 . 1/20/2011
I'm a hardcore R/Hr shipper and it was difficult for me to find your story. I usually search the R/Hr category. Well I'm glad I found it, because I love the idea behind that story. It's funny and interesting and you're definitely a very good writer.

I really hope to read more soon...

p.s. In chapter6 seems like Hermione initiate the kiss with Cormac and she enjoyed it. But in chapter7 you wrote that Cormac kissed her and she was angry at him, because it was unecessary. It seems a little off.

Anyway, is this story going to be that long as it looks? Because 25dates with average 2-3 chapters/date that means 50-75 chapters! Not that I would mind. I'm just curious.
Violet Saphira Darling chapter 7 . 1/5/2011
LOL love this chapter! but i think hermione would have cried, she does cry wen she's angry, like and the yule ball, she was angry at ron for trying to boss her around. and why was she angry at cormac? he kissed her, but she kinda liked it! lol maybe ure just trying to get rid of cormac..and im being sad :( lol any chance of cormac coming bak? ireally like him in this story! haha wutever :] LOL i think ron asking the waitress out was HILARIOUS and pure genius :) lol. AH yay, i luv this story! all old characters reuniting! (luna) haha good job
Rihanna chapter 7 . 1/3/2011
Bloody hell how dare you put my name in your little jk. I loved but when luna said " Harry have you've been feeling yourself?" I laughed. Ricardo would have like this line. You should add in the story " Fifteen inches.. and a dream:)
whodidyoukillforyoururl chapter 6 . 1/3/2011
this is awesome :D keep writing please? x
Violet Saphira Darling chapter 6 . 1/1/2011
aahh LOVE THIS CHAPTER:) nice description, i'm getting a good picture of how the place looks like, and what everyone's wearing and stuff. lol pansy is pissing me off, but i really like cormac and hermione. the ending was epic xD HAHHA RON IS SOOO LIKE THAT! nice job ;) can't wait 4 the next chapter
sia023 chapter 6 . 12/30/2010
besides the few minor grammatical errors, this story has a lot of promise and im really enjoying it :)

keep updating please. xox
lavlav123 chapter 6 . 12/29/2010
haha in your face ron!
lavlav123 chapter 4 . 12/29/2010
i love how ron is so insenceitive!
Rihanna chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Im suprised in you Eminem I didn't think you could right this good! I love your cute little remarks there just like you. But go over your story darling caz fred was dead in the beginning and he some how ended up later on... Love it anyways!
meltedhappiness chapter 6 . 12/29/2010
Hmm, I like the plot and the pairing that are destined together for the end. But, I'm confused, if Hermione is really going to end up with Ron, then how come she feels such a huge spark with Cormac? Well, I guess they'll be friends. And I have a question: Is George or Fred dead in this? Because you mentioned George in the beginning, but Fred in the end and then they weren't ever mentioned together. Just wondering, but waiting for more! Great potential!
SlytherinPrincessxXx chapter 6 . 12/29/2010
I laughed SO hard at Fred's description. It's like: elegant, gorgeous, dashing... FRED!... pretty, handsome. Haha. Update soon!
abc ruins chapter 5 . 12/29/2010
hey...xice stry ...just wnted to let u know ur stry is appreciated
Violet Saphira Darling chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
hahaha i'm loving this story! :) it's hilarious and very random, but i like seeing ron and hermione's competitive sides! haha. OH MY GOD. I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING LOL about pansy. i know this is kinda random, but plz plz plz plz plz plz plzplzplzpzlzplzpzlzplz PLZ ..do u think u could like include draco somewhere in this story? haha idk. NOT W/ GINNY THO. god noe. i like hermione and draco :) think about it! haha. great story :) update
SlytherinPrincessxXx chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
Haha oh I love Pansy's attitude! It suits her so well. I can't believe Cormac is back to torment Hermione. She HAD to ne desperate haha. Update soon!
The Master chapter 3 . 12/24/2010
I really like this idea, and I feel like your writing is improving as you go. Good job.
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