Reviews for As a Tower Firmly Set
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
normally i'd probably avoid fics like this (speaking from experience, there's not a lot of good nes) but your writing is so good that i decided to take a look and yup... Good Fic right here
Alicy-sunberg chapter 6 . 10/29/2016
*slow clapping and staring with awe* amazing. Simply amazing... When can we expect an original work on your part? I'm eager to discover your work on something else than fanfiction. This I think, is one of my favorite AC fanfiction btw. I loved EVERY MOMENT of it. The character development, the story, the dialogues my God everything was so satisfying and so spot-on! Annetta and Panfilo were both amazing characters and I loved discovering your intake in the life of Assassins in Rome. And that last dialogue with that final... It feels like I ate one if the most amazing meal in my life : I still feel like I want more of it even though I am plenty satisfied with the dessert. Totally worth it.
Alicy-sunberg chapter 3 . 10/29/2016
Panfilo, I love this man all the way. The punch felt amazing. I KNEW he still had some strength left in him. He just needed... an update of a kind!
bookwriter123456 chapter 6 . 6/17/2016
Oh my gosh I LOVED THIS! Everyone from the game was in character, especially Ezio! I really hope to read more Assassin Creed fanfics from you!
KaiTheKid chapter 6 . 2/15/2016
Absolutely beautiful
Nikolai22 chapter 5 . 12/17/2015
Loved this! Bringing a story to the backup boys in Rome lol. To be honest I never used them too much I feared their death and Ezio can fight armies at a time.
Ginger-Snapp chapter 6 . 10/18/2014
That was amazingly what I needed after I finished Brotherhood. You are an amazing writer and manager to turn NPCs into something great without making it awkward, or a fan service, or any other easily made mistakes. I would love to hear more. I will now be stalking you forever.
Ginger-Snapp chapter 1 . 10/18/2014
This is awesome. I absolutely adore this. More to follow when I finish reading.
Reading4soul chapter 2 . 8/12/2014
I'm astounded and thrilled by the amount of care and detail you've poured into these NPC's. You've made their stories complex and compelling to read. Kudos!
Nalahime chapter 6 . 7/26/2014
This is AWESOME! Thanks so much for writing this! To be honest I had never a real "attachment" to any of the recruits in the game, except for Annetta, because she kinda stuck with me whyever, so I never wondered much about the recruits or what they story could have been. But now I think Ill get really attached to them the next time I play the game again. Its a great idea to write about the recruits, really! You should write more (if you not already did), because Im kinda infinetly interested in Nino. I dont really know why, but he piqued my interest as did Tullio. By the way I was stunned and shocked when I read that he died. I REALLY couldnt believe it.
Great story and a great idea! Keep it up!
Kyrara chapter 6 . 1/20/2014
Ah, what a lovely slice-of-life story. It's these little fragments that really make a world come to live, and there is always a place for a well written story with interesting caracter such as these on my favouries list!
Kyrara chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
...I think I'm really going to lke Ansetta. Also, wohoo, Ezio!
Kyrara chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Well, I certainly enjoyed this first part! And I'm pretty sure Ezio or some other central character will show up soon enough. And sometimes it's even better reading about in-world characters discussing our famed-in-story heroes, and I find this insider looking from the outsie perspective quite intriguing.
Trish chapter 6 . 9/2/2012
If you read my review on "A Month With Dragons" you'll already know how I feel about your writing.
So. As I lie here now feeling PAIN, I just want to suggest - please, just -
can't you write about fucking CARE BEARS for a change? IMMORTAL CARE BEARS? Where everything just works fucking out in the end and everyone rejoices and they live happily ever after?
You made me care about Tullio. Although I admit to calling his death the minute he was introduced, because taking away the comic relief / liveliest / funniest / most dorky character is just such a dick move, it had to be made. If knowing someone was going to die and -soon- kept me from caring, I wouldn't love my grandma. So I got invested. And so the ending of the story was overshadowed a bit by my grief. How to say this... I was emotionally in a room with Ermanno for most of chapter six.
I absolutely loved everything about this story.
And honestly, last time I had Ezio call for his Assassins in Revelations, one was right in the haystack next to the target. Just popped out from nowhere.
' were there the WHOLE TIME?! Dafuq!'
So your nod to these little idiosyncracies amused me greatly.
Thank you for the wonderful read.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/20/2012
How does this not have more views/reviews? You are one of the most talented writers I have ever read. I have seen many, many, many OC fics go horribly wrong but you make the oc interactions perfect. I will think of this whenever I send assassins on a mission or to kill guards. I always made up backstories for my assassins, but to see it written out so beautifully was a completely new experience for me. I am glad to have found this story. Keep writing amazing things.
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