Reviews for The Bet
Edhea Edheart chapter 4 . 3/28
That was hot, like hot damn wow. My gawdd.. I'm sprouting blood from my nose.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/13/2015
Can you please make a story to how Ash and Paul got together?
XxSterek-Wincestfan6xx chapter 5 . 9/14/2014
This was great. I bet ash won't make a bet with Paul again lol.
XxSterek-Wincestfan6xx chapter 4 . 9/14/2014
That was really hot
XxSterek-Wincestfan6xx chapter 3 . 9/14/2014
Looks like ash lost lol. That was a hot sex scene.
XxSterek-Wincestfan6xx chapter 2 . 9/14/2014
Lol Ash's first plan was a failure
XxSterek-Wincestfan6xx chapter 1 . 9/14/2014
I wonder whose gonna win the bet. Judging by how ash is acting idk if he's gonna win.
ForeverJaganFan chapter 5 . 3/26/2014
amazing! probably one of the only writers to actually do something like this! i know how you feel. i rarely ever place a pokemon in my fics. though none of my pokemon fics are up yet. :P
Tsundere Jiuweihu Kitsune chapter 4 . 12/31/2013
I love it!
JuJu-chan the Vampire chapter 5 . 5/16/2013
Love it! XD
Lissy Stage chapter 5 . 2/25/2013
Hehe. Pretty hot. I was really looking forward to some spanking, and was so happy that I found it! xD
Octobers chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
I think my ovaries exploded.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/6/2013
Nice but I wish Ash won in away just to see what he would do.
Nice chapter 5 . 12/19/2012
Nice. I think it would be funny if you do an alternate version of chapters 3 and 4 were Ash wins and he finally gets to be on top of Paul. But it is up to you.
Won-Chan108 chapter 5 . 7/12/2012 STORY WAS SO SEXY AND HOT! I've loved this story for a year now. I finally got to finish it! I also loved the epilogue, Ashy-boy sure learned his lesson, LOL.
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