Reviews for Mages and Princesses
Guardoflight chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
Sounds interesting but are any of the MSN main cast be making an appearance?
RedPBass chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Hmm...interesting start.

I thought the Beatrix/Alexander thing seemed a little quick, and with the way Beatrix seems to think she's his girlfriend after 'just' a pactio's doable, but it needs a little more fleshing out at that part.

Anything else is just formatting complaints, since there are no dividers. If you want to separate sections of text, you have to use the 'Insert Horizontal Ruler' thing in the editor on the site. Also, you switched between Beatrix and Beatrice once or twice.

Anyway, nice start!