Reviews for everything's coming together
The Cuteness chapter 1 . 2/21/2013
Awww he saves her! So sweet.
The Little Author that Could chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
All and all it was alright. It was sort of rushed, though. But you have potential.

I really just wanted to point out that a "pedo" is short for pedophile, which is an adult that is sexually attracted to children. Since Alisha and Simon are the same age noone could consider him a pedophile for this, at all.

Maybe you want to replace that word with "creep" or something.

Happy writing! xx
mithrabear chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I love it! Simon Alisha 3 wonderful story!
quavers95 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Sooo good. You should really write more :D very in character, brilliantly written. Please continue :D
Rurple101 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
i loved it! a masterpiece! :) i love simon/alisha stories and this is in my top ten :)
For.your.smile chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
this dun make sense in the forst episode he touched her and his power worked it cant just stop
You Wanna Know Me chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Amazing!