Reviews for Bella's Birthday
Guest chapter 1 . 9/26/2014
just tooo sweet
Guest chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
very good
madnessdownunder2 chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Oh that was some dream! Nice work! However if one was in a slightly sensitive state of mind that could almost qualify as mind rape, he did not have permission to influence her dreams that way, it was not truely Edward doing this! ( I did say if one was of a delicate mind set! I found no offence in this)
AHotMess chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
So it took me a couple minutes to figure out why Jasper was there, and then it made more sence!

Um, that was VERY hot bb. Your descriptiveness is fabulous! Loved it.

Xoxo
suemason chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Ok, I'm confused. No Edward? Did she have sex with Jasper (smell of sex and her bones feel like jelly), or did he just play with her emotions? I really hope Jasper was just sending her happy feelings for her birthday.

Not happy if this was a B&J.
Katarzyna88gb chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
hahahaah awesome
OCDJen chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
That was awesome! It was really good sweets, and writing het is hard for a slash girl...Loved the ending, glad you squeezed Jasper in there :)
Mrs. Agget chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
DAMN Sarah! That was awesome! LOVED that it was a dream, and that Jasper induced it hehehehehe...

Love ya, wifey!

Penny
Twilight-Junki3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
*gasp* Mommy! You wrote a het fanfic? O_o

It was amazing. I loved the ending most lol
I need a life bad chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
Holy Hell women ...totes HOT!
mouse555 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
ell, you know I love this. For a slash chick, you do HET really well!

Happy Birthday to tazz!

xx