Violins don't have frets. Perhaps change it to say Sherlock's fingers were resting on the neck or the strings.

This is it. I'm on the last chapter now. I know you haven't updated... for many years, actually. I look forward to reading the last chapter; your story has been very enjoyable.

I like how you stay true to Sherlock's character. You write him well, I really like to the chapter where it was his point of view. With John being a military doctor, I don't think he would be a squeamish as he seems but it's really not a big deal. And I really like this story. The plot is really captivating.

In the off chance you do read this, know that your story entertained many. And even though I know it's been almost 5 years since an update, it's not going to stop that little glimmer of hope that maybe one day you'll be back.

Why have you not finished this amazing piece!

Before I move on to chapter four, I have to say something. As an American, I am reading this and wincing. As a Sherlock fangirl and voracious reader, I am reading this and grinning madly. Are you sure you're American? ;)

I really would love to see where you go with this. It was so well done. I think Sherlock's dilemma about his feelings at the pool was spot on. Hope you get back to this some day.

Its such a pity you wont finish this story...

Americanized Sherlock equals funniest thing ever. Oh my gosh.

I'm liking it! Please continue! i cursed my internet provider out pretty bad for having a black out while i was reading this.

Okay, I officially love this story. For one, it's set in Knoxville, and that is where I will be going in two weeks to work at Oak Ridge National Lab for the semester, and two, it is so perfectly in character it is amazing. The jokes between Watson and Sherlock always make me laugh. I like the fact that you are concentrating on how Sherlock disguises himself, but not making everything easy for him. I hope to see an update sometime in the future, as it would be a shame to leave a fic like this unfinished. In two weeks, if you want, I'd be able to give you some first hand details of the area and an outsiders view of Knoxville since it is only a five minute drive from my apartment. Let me know, and I'd love to read another chapter. Also, if you just want someone to bounce ideas off of, send me a P.M. I'd be happy to act as a sounding board. You're a great author.

Beautiful work. Can't say I quite agree with your portrayal of people from Tenessee but beautiful nonetheless. 3

Wow

Sherlock forcing a second personality into himself...

Beautifully constructed and written so far!

Please continue to write more and update soon!

A very original and interesting story!

Fascinating story - I hope you return to it someday, I'd love to read more!

god i wish you would continue this, i really do :)

but even if you won't i just wanted to say that this is was a proper blast

i enjoyed your Sherlock immensely and am even a bit considering making parts of this my head cannon :D

thanks for the fun

Lill

P.S But I can't want to stop - there's the tragedy of the Sherlock you are writing right there in one sentence - brilliant

The characters are so complex, it's a joy to read it.

sometimes I think, both of them should talk about the emotions. Sherlock that he can't loose John and John that he'll be there even whem Sherlock goes crazy. But they are men so they won't talk or?

So Sherlock loves Mrs. Hudson. Does he love her as friend or platonical or romantical?