Reviews for Mansion Song
Shortchannel4 chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Interesting story
madre cat chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
I liked it: a sad, slightly twisted tale not quite about romance or love, but about lust, longing and maybe a little hate . . .

And I really admire this sentence, it's rather twisted and slinky and beautiful

" In the sallow light from the cigarette, the woman's eye—mean and sensual and all things Lyra does not know—study the girl quizzically."

Lyra is just a girl on her way to becoming something and Athena is the lady she'll probably never be, but she'll never forget . . . Makes me sad. :(
TheChiaroscuro chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Woah! Intense! Poor Athena, she needs more love 3

Seriously, talk about no fics for her u.u"

This short, a little sad, and interesting. Hmm... wonder if anyone would bother to make a more lengthy story about these 2. But oh well, these are just the musings of my spare time. xD

P.S. She was a pretty memorable character to me in SoulSilver. :'3
girleater chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Oh, my.

Beautiful.

3

Amazing work.
meri47 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
I don't really get it, at least not the way I think you were aiming at, but I like it anyway.

Keep up the good work, and happy holidays!
fately chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
AW SHIT. I don't usually read yuri, but this is really sad DDDD: Stupid unrequited love. It was really well-written and I really like how you made Athena in the story! :DDDD