Argh. Such a complex story. Love the pairing and emotions explored and...all that. But urgh! Quite unsettling, too.
Great stuff.

I love it. What a fantastic job with the plot, suspense and wrap up. I love your John, he is perfect. Well done.

loved it!

I really enjoyed this story especially the interaction between Anthea and John. Their relationship was really cute and flowed really well. I love how Avra (and I love her name) pointed out how stupid the Holmes brothers were being and I do love the sections from Sherlock's point of view :)

Wonderful story! This is surely one of the best fanfics I've read in the Sherlock fandom.
It's very well written and structured. The plot makes sens and I didn't notice any holes in it. The social interactions are realistic and the relationships well planed out.
The characters are great, especially John and Jane. I like the relationship those two came to have and that in the end they decided to work together.
Thank you so much for writing, posting and completing this story. It's appreciated.

This was a great read. Loved how strong both John and Jane were...how capable on their own against terrible odds. It was sad to see how quickly the Holmes brothers fell for the deception, but you do have to give them some credit. Even thinking they were betrayed, they couldn't just hand over their 'betrayers.' Lovely work.

I'm not usually a fan of John/Anthea, but this story made me wish that they had dumped the Holmes brothers and got together as a result. This was really good.

Loved it, thank you and well done!

That was really interesting. It was certainly not what I was expecting but interesting nonetheless. I liked how you focused more on John and Jane's realtionship than Sherlock and John's.

Oh my god. This is absolutely beautiful, this is wonderful. Your writing is brilliant, and this made me love Anthea so much.
The feels for me were quite much stronger than expected, maybe because i am listening to "Say something" by great big world - and it fits perfectly :D

Oh my goodness! My heart is absolutely pounding by the end of this chapter! I hate that I have to go to work right now, but I'll definitely be straight back to reading this after I return. Such marvelous writing! :)

Beautiful. The most amazing story I've read yet!

WHY
THIS DOES NOT HELP
THIS DID NOT HELP
NVER AGAIN
GOODBYE
I DID NOT ASK FOR THIS

Whaaaaat! So much badassery on display here. I got goosebumps.

I'm so angry with the Holmes brothers, I don't care how much evidence there was. I'm so scared for John!