Reviews for Second Best
Ne'ith5 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Excellent analysis of the story. Poor Ed loving someone that never even notices that you do. Maybe Ed should stop hoping and look somewhere else-as in a new job and eventually after healing from his loss a new lover as well.
Disgruntled Peony chapter 1 . 9/1/2002
Ohhhh, eeek! That is such an angsty story! I love it! *sniffle* Hits ya right in the gut. And it's an excellent continuation of the ep, if you ask me. I always wondered what happened after Ed hit the floor... *hands Carol a cherry coke* Good job! :-D
Lilith7 chapter 1 . 8/24/2002
Wow, that was good, I have only trecently started watching Prey in syndication, but I have read a lot of fanfic and that was one of the best.
Dawnwind chapter 1 . 3/28/2002
Oh, my sweet Ed, ever relegated to the background whenever Tom is around. that Sloan is just an idiot. Very good, Carol, I read both your Prey stories and you should keep writing them!
InvisibleMom chapter 1 . 3/16/2002
This was really, really good. Yeah, sure she was running her hands down his body to check for injuries. *snerk* In her place I would do the same thing. *I-Mom tries for an innocent look but fails* Of course we want more. An Ed based series sound wonderful.
iwomans-sister chapter 1 . 3/16/2002
Awww ;'( my heart hurts for the guy. Carol, this is so sad! I love it! Are you gonna write more? Hmm... Now I have to go watch all the eppies of Prey. *Runs off*
QSMad chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
I really liked this. But why doubt? I love all of your stories. I love all that Ed Angsty stuff!

Thanks for a good read, yet again.
Allianora2 chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
Nice fic, Carol. Clever how you tied not only Ed's loss for Tom but Ed's feelings for Sloan. More more more please! :)
jude chapter 1 . 3/14/2002
yeah carol! i followed you here to the prey section. I love Ed too and would have loved to see him with Sloan. Maybe in your fics? Good job i enjoyed it. Poor Ed!