Reviews for The Pin Up Girl
Guest chapter 16 . 10/8/2014
Man, these two love going at it lol I'm glad that you didn't make them so "1950s". The kind of sex these two are at was very taboo. Super happy with this 1950s pair:)
smook chapter 9 . 1/6/2014
OH - do you have a banner for this story.
I still have not started to read .
Are you on Facebook?
Thank you - Susie Mook
smook chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Can't wait to dig IN to this story now that I discovered YOU.
Do you have the story in PDF (the 2 story 1 story version)?
If yes, may I have?
Thank you and best regards, - Susie Mook
WiseOldSoul chapter 38 . 10/26/2013
no matter how a story ends,
the fact that i was so involved to actually feel so much for your characters,
emos and all, shows how good of a writer you truly are...

thanks for the story...
i enjoyed it immensely,
with all of the frustrations and emos i felt through it all!
WiseOldSoul chapter 34 . 10/26/2013
how can bella give up Edward who kisses the ground, no, dirt she walks on
and love this cheating dirtbag also?
sorry, but this story makes it very difficult for me to have sympathy or like
this bella !
WiseOldSoul chapter 33 . 10/26/2013
i feel no sympathy for bella,
none at all...
WiseOldSoul chapter 32 . 10/26/2013
sorry but this is just really idiotic...

a heroin bella is NOT!
actually at this point, she is rather disgusting me...

i realize it is just a story,
but when we become so invested in the story and
in the characters, it almost becomes quite personal.
your writing has forced its readers to care for the characters...
which is a wonderful thing! :)

this bella, in this story, does NOT deserve Edward.
she does NOT deserve the happily ever after...
at least NOT with this gentle loving protecting Edward!
he deserves Better!
WiseOldSoul chapter 31 . 10/26/2013
did anything really think they could trust Heidi? she needs to be fired by Edward and
put in her the gutter!

it's quite surprising how Bella believes in her sex appeal when dealing with the paps, the public and the cameras yet behaves like a dumb naive innocent...
her characterization thus far is completely contradicting and annoying and frustrating!
WiseOldSoul chapter 28 . 10/26/2013
i don't know how much more i can take of this delusional woman...

she is just so so annoyingly frustrating...
WTH is her problem?

she is trying to keep both ,,
she isn't good enough for Edward
WiseOldSoul chapter 27 . 10/26/2013

Bella is so frustrating, annoying and ... delusional!
WiseOldSoul chapter 24 . 10/26/2013
Bella is just so... annoying!
WiseOldSoul chapter 23 . 10/26/2013
sorry but Bella is rather a stupid woman, isn't she?

why the heck she would return to Jake's in the middle of the nights...
she is just annoying when she behaves so irrational (plain stupid)
in this story...
debslmac chapter 39 . 7/27/2013
:) loved this story
Guest chapter 38 . 2/5/2013
Forever in the love triangle. Always in some sick threesome. Eternity of betreyal.
cbzoo chapter 10 . 7/13/2012
you write good sexy scene
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