Reviews for Maybe It's Time To Change
MoonStar100 chapter 17 . 8/14/2012
Awwww really good story BUT no updates in a long time...Well this story made me laugh and cry so i think ill wait a life time, if i have to, for you to update.
DarkPhoenixRises chapter 1 . 6/2/2012
Omg! You have to update! And if they can't figure who raped albus they should make someone use leglimens (think that's how you spell it) to look through his mind. I see this hadn't been updated since 2011. Left us all in a big cliff hanger O_O but nonetheless its a inspiring story about how bad it can get just by being yourself. Whether it be bisexual, gay, lesbian ot straight. I want to know the connection albus and scorpius has. Its intriguing. Makes me think of another story I read. And I love the dark magic suggestion another reviewer voiced. It could give a whole new twist where albus is struggling with his good and evil side. Just a thought :) please PLEASE continue this so I can rest easy knowing the ending :P
M0rbidUnic0rn chapter 16 . 5/6/2012
Awww Why'd you end the story like that! It made me cry!): can't you finish it instead? Make it so they have to use powerful dark magic to bring Al back and it makes them realise how much he and Scorp mean to eachother? Then they report Nick and Alex and Lotus defends them so Al dumps her and gets with Scorp? Pretty please? )':
AGreatPerhaps12 chapter 17 . 9/7/2011
Dear chocolaTTelover,

Sad as I am that there will not be many quick updates on this story in the near future, I think it's awesome you are forging your own path with an original novel! Sometimes a break from fanfiction is good. It keeps writers from becoming too dependent on other authors' created worlds and characters, which are always fun to play with, but it's also good to come up with your own stuff. So I'm glad that you're working on those projects, but won't be giving up on this one either.I wish you the best of luck and hope to check out your original novel soon :)

AGreatPerhaps12
Windspiel chapter 16 . 8/18/2011
hey choco...

your writing is good,no doubt. the rape scene is very well written, too. but I personally find it too graphic. Plus: It's not logical in my eyes. You'd better come up with a good explanation. Albus KNOWS who raped him and he has - scars and everything - proof of the raping. The two boys face extremely hard penalty, and what for? They are homophobic and the have shown it? I don't see why they would take such a risk for such a "small" reason.

But I'll keep on reading, I'm waiting for a good explanation ;-)

greetings, Wispi
XxHarry-DracoxX chapter 16 . 8/18/2011
GAH!

Update!

Awesome chapter!

I've never really thought of this couple, coco!

But when I saw it on your profile page, I decided to give the pairing a shot.

I LOVE IT! *grins*

Update, update, update!
Inky-Shadow chapter 16 . 8/13/2011
Albus is not dead, he is not dead, there is no way he's dead.
Slash Shipping on the Pacific chapter 16 . 8/1/2011
Oh poor Alby that was awful but really well done to you because it really was well written.

Update soon :D
Boosher chapter 16 . 7/30/2011
Wow... well dang that was violent. You did a great job with writing that scene. Keep up the excellent writing.
BeautifulDemise4 chapter 16 . 7/29/2011
I loved it. It was extremely dead on, from my guess, of what a rape scene would be like. I am totally, 100 percent, terrified for Scorpius, Harry, and James. Albus can't be dead! I can't wait for the next chapter. As a said in my first comment, Your an extremely gifted writer.
Fire The Unicorn chapter 16 . 7/29/2011
Wow. I LOVE this story so far. Please update soon! The rape scene was good, you know, if your into that kind of stuff xD.
BlueCandy chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
Ugh, this story had so much potential, the first chapter wasn't bad then, in the 2nd chapter is when things turned really weird thanks to Al's dream, but since it was just a dream, and dreams can be weird I though that I should give it another shot...but nope, things got worse with the whole magic mirror called Andromeda and the scene with Spike...I couldn't take it characters are so flat, especially Scorpius, what's his personalty? He doesn't have one! All he does is blush.

Too bad, you write well...you just make poor plot decisions...

Keep on practicing and take a brake from those cheesy YA romance novels.
drumline chapter 16 . 7/29/2011
First off, i have to tell you that the rape scene was very realistic,which is a really good thing! Some fics that do have rape scenes are not convincing in my opinion. Also, what a great twist! I never thought in a million years that Albus would get raped! I always thought that you would have Scorpius raped by Spike. Well, I was surprised and somewhat pleased to say the least because I really enjoyed this update!

Btw, thanks for the dedication!
Mebina Sobriquet chapter 16 . 7/29/2011
While extremely hard to read, this was a very well-written (and horribly graphic) chapter. Oh my God, poor Albus, though. One thing- by 'castrated' do you mean they literally cut off his testes? I hope you have him fixed up as much as possible in the next few chapters, and thanks for the speedy update! I now have both hands and a bit of an arm on the cliff top, and may be able to hold out for as much as a week :P Although those allligators are fetching the trampolines...MS xxx
fanfictionismyaddiction chapter 16 . 7/28/2011
Oh my wow! I vote for no more scenes like this one.. I am actually a little depressed.. Right now...

I hate your fictional characters soo much right now it is not even funny... :(

I can not believe they castrated him after all that ... Why?..

Oh an I hope I interperted your rape scene accurtately.. Although I did skim through it .. I couldn't bear it..

I think the rapin Ablus was a way for them to emasculate .. (Spellin error?) Him..

I think to be able to capture all this angst in a chapter is commendable .. I jus vote for it to never happen again... It was just too much..

Update soon... And something of a less.. Depressing nature...

Please oh please let Albus be alive ...and let Harry kill those sick bastards!
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