|Reviews for The Forced Confession Of Bathilda Bagshot|
| TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
A great story. Very well written.
| Sohalia Talitha chapter 1 . 3/21/2011
I liked this. Its not often I find that someone can write well in first person well, but I felt you achieved it admirably!
Because I enjoyed the first person so much, I found it a little jarring that you suddenly changed perspective towards the end. I think it would have been far better if you'd continued in Bathilda's voice and perhaps given us a statement along the lines of "I know this isn't what you want to hear and that you're going to twist what I've got to say, you're a harpy etc"
I enjoyed your take on how Bathilda thought of them - I think her impressions were intelligently written, I like that you can interpret how much of what she's saying is true, and that there's space to wonder if maybe she's trying to whitewash events.
It's a shame it all came out in bold. My eyes are bleeding XD
| wheresthewolf chapter 1 . 12/21/2010