|Reviews for Truths about Prophecy|
| Guest chapter 18 . 11/24/2016
amazing fic and a pleasure to read :) you did a AMAZING job!
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/24/2016
hot dam! ;) smut was great :)
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/24/2016
interesting fic :)
| Guest chapter 3 . 11/24/2016
poor Dave lol :) gotta love blushing dave
| Anloquen chapter 15 . 5/31/2014
OK, sorry for the last comment, you made it look like they had sex that hungover morning. This is way better, but still... These cheesy porn comments ruin everything. I mean please... They love each other, they are gentle and caring and suddenly they say things like a hairy pizza deliverer in a very bad PWP would. "I'm gunna make u scream, gurl", "Who's your daddy?" "Lemme destroy URANUS". "Yea, ride my cock, sistah!".
Jezus effin christ, it's tragic.
| Anloquen chapter 8 . 5/31/2014
No, no, no... Sex "the morning after" and Drake posessing Dave just like that, with no lube, no preparation, and no visit in the toilet? I mean... damn... Otherwise this scene would be so beautiful. Couldn't you just ommit the "hardness inside him" part? Anal sex is not a piece of cake, you know...
| Anloquen chapter 7 . 5/31/2014
I love the plot and the way you picture characters. I especially enjoy the way you let the relationship between Dave and Drake loom and slowly unwind in sharp contrast to most fics, where it is just "I just met him, I love him, No I don't, Yes I do, OMG.". Your story is so realistic and so hot!
One thing that bothers me is that you obviously have little experience with being drunk/hungover and thus you can't describe the behaviour of hammered people realistically. You can't be black-out wasted and make out the same evening! You either pass out in the elevator and pee your pants/throw up OR have more or less proper conversation and make out. Plus, in males it is especially difficult to have sex when they are shitfaced, because their magic wands simply don't work. All those scenes in movies where people be like "omg i can't remember how i had sex, repaired the sink and wrote an essay on Western European 17th century clothing because I waswhite gurl drunk" are just fairytales. I mean it's not only your problem. Why is it so common? Can't you people get properly wasted for once to see how it is and THEN write drunken scenes?
Not to mention that hungover making out in fifth chapter. The morning breath after a night of heavy drinking is so terrible that even if you love someone more than you own soul you simply won't make out with that person. It reeks like troll's arse. Just... no... Hungover people starting a day without a proper shower? IMPOSIBRU!
| Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 18 . 4/24/2013
Awww... So sweet. Great job on the ending! :)
I shall now catalogue this in my fanficition favs to reread after I get the movie. :)
| Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 17 . 4/24/2013
Wow. So dramatic.. :)
| Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 16 . 4/24/2013
Ah, crap.. Not cool. :(
| Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 15 . 4/24/2013
Awww... That was soooo sweet. Cute. :)
I write them cute, but also hot, now.
I don't think I could pull off sweet very well anymore.
It has to be both for me.
Not that yours wasn't hot, 'cause it so was! :)
Great job! :)
| Sweet-Hearted SilverEars chapter 14 . 4/24/2013
Yea! That was good! Can't wait for the love scene! Sorry it took me so long. I'm soooo behind with my 'chapters to read' folder.. *sigh* :)
| boothandboneslove chapter 18 . 4/14/2013
That's it? It's over? No more? Well it was wonderful and it's so nice to smile after crying all over the place with the last chapter.
| Guest chapter 17 . 11/6/2012
This is such a good story.
| SparklingBoobs chapter 17 . 11/1/2012
YES. Please add a smut scene in the epilogue. This is the ONLY good Sorceror's Apprentice fanfic out there... I really want to read the rest so please update soon!