|Reviews for Krait Book 02 Surfeit of Malfoys|
| Aurora Lancy chapter 18 . 4/16
Hey rereading this for the second time waiting for your next Story about krait
And now it's your fault I'm addicted to the corrs... Ever thought about going into advertisement-industry?
| dianaanne chapter 27 . 1/4
Jolly good fun rereading this.
| Jirel chapter 2 . 6/28/2014
I just recently found your stories and have started reading them. I REALLY like this last conversation between Sirius and Severus. I think you have done a fantastic job of showing their progression towards friendship. I really look forward to reading more of your stories. :)
| aalens chapter 28 . 6/13/2014
Loved this one too, absolutely loved it. Your imagination is mightily impressive and the characters well developed and interesting - of course there are so many of them that if, as I suspect, their numbers increase with each episode/book I shall probably have to start a chart of who everyone is to help myself keep track of them all. It is a little bit like reading an old Russian novel, but thank goodness each name does not have several confusing variants like the Russian names do. Lol
I shall start the next adventure tomorrow.
Many thanks for writing this great saga.
| aalens chapter 4 . 6/12/2014
You asked us to point out repeated names and 'I' used inappropriately (due to your idiosyncratic Word software). Well, I was used wrongly three times in this chapter, and Krait told Krait that the invisibility potion was a particularly good brew, whereas I think Severus would have been the one doing the telling. Lol.
| aalens chapter 3 . 6/12/2014
One of the things I really like about the two and a bit stories of yours I have read so far, is that the protagonists do not irritatingly and boringly agonise for pages and pages about things that could easily be solved by anyone with an IQ of over 80 by a few minutes of communication and straight talking.
| dianaanne chapter 28 . 4/7/2014
Was that Emma story the first Jane Fairfax book?
| dianaanne chapter 22 . 4/7/2014
I feel the same way about Lucius. Which is why I also like Three Slytherin Marauders.
| Anne chapter 16 . 4/14/2012
Sarah, you should know that I truly am enjoying re-reading this. I had almost fotgotten certain things, such as the (right know only proposed) betrothal of Bil and Sirius. It is a lot of characters to keep track of; assume you have all the relationships, including the various subgroups, written down on a chart or something. Take care! Anne
| Anne Seebaldt chapter 28 . 1/26/2012
Yes I do like redeemed Lucius. And what you did to Bella is brilliant.
| asanoame chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
i was wondering about something, er, did you put up the wrong chap 1? or is it deliberated? cos i saw the heading, and it wrote that it was book three. so i was confused... and you had the same 1st chap for both book 2 and 3.
| Trancefan chapter 4 . 3/16/2011
I love this series, but . . . you might want to check the names again, there were a few times "I" popped up - including instead of Hogwarts near the end, I believe. Not to be difficult.
| skidney chapter 21 . 2/12/2011
love the star wars refences
| AfraidOfFalling chapter 5 . 1/26/2011
Finally reading another chapter!
Oho, too right Arthur is that Severus does not see Krait as a daughter...
So summarily dismissive of Percy and Peter, they are...at least Krait isn't fool enough to dismiss Kreacher...
| AfraidOfFalling chapter 4 . 1/8/2011
still some I's, unfortunately.
Ehhh this is why I shouldn't read stories over weeks...I get confused as to what's going on. Too many characters that I can't remember...who's Grace, again?