Reviews for The Serpent and the Snake
ankofan chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
keep updating dude ;)
Jigoku-Dayu93 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Not bad. If only it really turned out that way!
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
Not bad! You actually used the English Dubbed version, I'm impressed!

You need to space a bit more between the dialouge and the paragraphs, or else they will look bunch up.

Ryunn Kazan chapter 1 . 12/22/2010
AW...Why not? It's well written and pretty good so far.