Reviews for Jumanji: revenge of the Hunter
kittyhawk09 chapter 3 . 8/6/2011
Hey this story is awesome and please update soon. I want to learn more about jack's past. Also at first you said he was 11 and disappeared for 13 years. Now your saying he was 13 and gone for 20 years. I'm confused. Please PM me and explain all this. Please update soon.
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Dear tyfi:

In the rhyme, I think the last word you're looking for is "délivrerait", not "délivrer as". (Which means, of course, that it doesn't rhyme anymore, so I guess you're back to square one.) Also, it's "pawn", not "pon".

Sincerely,

Qoheleth
stallion-ponyta chapter 3 . 5/25/2011
wow, please continue!
fclovesharrypotter chapter 2 . 2/25/2011
Ok I love Harry Potter and don't worry I can wait ;)
fclovesharrypotter chapter 3 . 2/24/2011
This is really good! Please continue soon!