Reviews for Do Over
twiaunt35 chapter 1 . 9/10
I would love to have a copy of your original story, please!
ggb-luma chapter 19 . 9/9
Can't believe it took me this long too come across this fic. It was super sweet,loved it..
candi9699 chapter 19 . 9/9
I just realized you are the writer of the arc I just read - cutlas. Loved this story - keep writing!
midnitereader chapter 19 . 9/8
This was sooo good! I'm glad Edward got a second chance. And I love how Masen learned to believe in Santa again.
grandmachix chapter 19 . 9/7
I think the Janitor was Michael. This was better than the original 'Wonderful Life' and that's saying a lot. I'm glad I got to read it before it was pulled. When it's published, I hope you make a fortune.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 17 . 9/6
Her 5th novel? She could write Edward's story.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 16 . 9/6
Nooo! Michael sent him back! Or was it all a dream?
Judy
grandmachix chapter 15 . 9/6
At last! They are together again. Communicating. Loving each other.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 14 . 9/6
Now that she's aware, Bella saw in James what Edward saw.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 13 . 9/6
I'm glad they're getting closer. Wouldn't it be nice if Bella actually wrote her four books from the other reality.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 12 . 9/6
Edward IS different. Bella has had a glimpse of him. Maybe it will work out.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 11 . 9/6
So the second time wasn't a total loss. He received the message to listen.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 10 . 9/6
He really needs to check the budget. And talk to Jasper.
Judy
grandmachix chapter 9 . 9/6
The best laid plans of mice and men... Edward didn't know about the seminar. And how will he pay for all of this?
Judy
grandmachix chapter 8 . 9/6
Is this an episode of Keystone Kops?
Judy
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