|Reviews for Aura Warrior: Champion of Arceus|
| coduss chapter 2 . 11/17/2013
| uscias chapter 2 . 11/6/2013
Please update soon.
| powermachine79 chapter 2 . 8/1/2013
Great story...looking forward to read more :)
| kooloowarrior chapter 2 . 4/19/2013
Ida say keep the number at three or four have 'ash'ley and Gary's twin join up and your set that way you don't need to go through the trouble of makin naruto seem either shallow, extremely lucky, or whatever. I read a huge harem fic one and couldn't finish it it got too distracting with the extremely compnvinient starts to relationships naruto had basically all the women naruto came across wanted to jump his bones. Wich is unrealistic
| kooloowarrior chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Um dag that's a lot of women wouldn't it be easier to write if there were only like 3? Or four max? I don't understand the appeal of having 10 women in a relationship with 1 dude I mean come one he should just skip it and get some hookers if he's gonna do that.
| wnaruto616 chapter 2 . 3/8/2013
cant wait for the next chapter
| AnimeMinder chapter 2 . 1/14/2013
More charters please. I love this story.
| Hyougakage chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I always figured a Pokemon should be able to learn alot more than the simple four move set-up, more like eight of 'em, ten at most. Seriously, as it is, it's damn near impossible to pick just four moves, most of my strategies win up covering half my line-up because they're limited to four moves.
| Shadowprice chapter 2 . 11/8/2012
this is good you should make more
| Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
i wonder if u could add espeon and umbreon to his pokeparty
| Light Lord Cybergate chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
Nice...good story so far. In fact the only thing which isn't so good is this: Published: 12-22-10
2010?...two chapters since then?
That makes me...nervous.
Thankfully the update was fairly recent so I have high hopes that the next isn't too far away.
Well done...I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Until next time.
| Toby860 chapter 2 . 9/18/2012
Not bad. Will this follow pokemon canon to a point or made up.
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/7/2012
It's good to see you've updated this great story again. The harem should consist of Misty, May, Dawn, and Iris
| death77 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012
Entertaining read and I hope you update soon. About the harem situation, if you want do do that it's fine as long as you do a reasonable number like around 3 or 4. As long as you do well, happy writing.
| jebest chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
take out Gielle and Erika since not a lot of people remember them and they were only on for 1 or 2 episodes while the rest of the gym leader girls are on at least 4 or 5 of at least being shown or being mentioned. keep the rest of the girls but add in Flannery and Claire when Naruto is a bit older and later on in the fanfic. maybe add in the girl from the Charizard zone to make it interesting