Reviews for Fang: The Black Hawk
amy141 chapter 11 . 7/31/2014
Omg I hope that their okay!
FlockPack chapter 21 . 6/25/2014
Two things:

1. Traditor
2. Graved
is what you wrote, the correct spelling is:
1. Traitor
2. Grabbed
I have tried to ignore it so many times, but I fear I cannot *Dramatic*
FlockPack chapter 18 . 6/25/2014
-laughs- okay, BACON (I cannot bold it) is a really good inside joke, you gotta admit.
Gabby chapter 22 . 3/30/2014
I know this isn't relevant now, but for future reference in stories, your geography is off. If they traveled west they would head to California and Washington . East to get to Alabama and Philadelphia.
flockpack chapter 34 . 11/27/2013
me: still haven't got an account
iggy: still bugging me
me: anywho, THAT IS SO A WORD STUPID COMPUTER! anyway, I got a book series that is perfect but not so perfect, it is called house of night the first book is called marked, it has all of those things except,
max: it does not have a love triangle...
me: it has a love SQUARE! what do I mean-
zoey-main character, fledgling vampire
heath-human, zoey is trying to break up with him but he wont leave her
eric-zoey's real boyfriend, also fledgling vampire, soon to be adult vampire
loren-vampire, flirts with zoey, TEACHER! ruins her relationship with heath and eric.
never read it
flockpack, iggy, and max
flockpack chapter 26 . 11/22/2013
me: I raised my hand and bashed it against the top bunk! grrr
Iggy: and now the computer doesn't think grrr is a word.
max: well it is, hey fang?
fang: what?
max: I want a kid!
-max and fang busy talking-
me: anyway, best story eva, ya got me hooked gurl!
iggy: flockpack?
me: hmm?
iggy: stop talking gangsta
angel: I liked it when Louis kissed ella
iggy: when did you get here?
me: I know have the majority of the flock!
angel: well, technically i'm here to help FP take over the world, but whatevs
me: awesome story, now update indi: the hunting falcon
angel: we'll be here trying to take over the world, have a good day!
me: and if you want to help us take over the world, tell us next time you update Indi: the hunting falcon *evilgrin*
jubnlivecity21 chapter 37 . 6/29/2013
Oh my gosh!Ashwome!(geek voice)
jublivecity21 chapter 36 . 6/29/2013
Thats why your awesome!
jublivecity21 chapter 35 . 6/29/2013
...awesome :!
nidoran hugger 9 chapter 34 . 6/29/2013
Man your cliffyies suck cause there not cliffies !,':(
P.s:I changed my name this once...can u tell who it is?
jublivecity21 chapter 33 . 6/29/2013
Go u!james patterson should take writing lessons from u!
jublivecity21 chapter 33 . 6/29/2013
NIDORAN!ultimate fav. Poison type out there from poke on cause I am who I am:)
jublivecity21 chapter 32 . 6/29/2013
AWESOME!xJo !that's a extremely happy silly u did mention p.t.s.d!just for the wrong person:/oh well...digi-poison type OUT!
jublivecity21 chapter 31 . 6/29/2013
Man these people were ssoooooooooo un original.I was a wild pikachu slash girl all said and done but nobody like me.
jublivecity21 chapter 29 . 6/28/2013
Yay!2things...
1:this is technical also anime o now its Host Club Human Avain Digi-Poision types represent!:'0(war/pumped up face)
And:thanks for the fang think there would be more because the tic is named after him!:*well...death ya or!:)
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