|Reviews for The Neighbor From Down the Hall|
| Featherfreak chapter 18 . 2/5
I've been rereading some of my favorite slash stories, so this is the second time I have read this. Please tell us what happened.
| igee778 chapter 18 . 2/5
I just realized as I got to the end u haven't updated in two years. . . Um is this story abandoned? I hope not cuz its really good! :):):):) well im Your new fan and I hope you can continúe this story.. especially with that cliffhanger. . . Best of luck!:)
| InvestedReader chapter 18 . 1/29
Hi, so I just found this story yesterday and I've read it all already! It's so amazing!
The backstories you've created for all of the characters are so detailed and captivating. I love what you've done with the characters and how you portray them.
The story itself is fantastic and well-written (though I have noticed a handful of spelling errors- for example "stair" instead of "stare"- I know a lot of the errors in Jasper's speech are intentional and part of his characterization, but I don't think these are part of that). I love the world you've created, and I find everything in it very believable and cohesive. The smut is very descriptive and fitting too (and not to mention really hot!).
And I know you haven't updated this in about 2 years now, but you can't just leave this on a cliffhanger! I'm so invested in this story and want to know what happens next! So I really hope you haven't abandoned this story. It's wonderful.
Just a couple questions overall though:
1. I still don't fully understand why Jasper ended up in Seattle after getting out of a Texas state prison. Did he choose to go there, or was he sent? Not a major issue, and I obviously love everything that's come about from it, but just something I've been wondering.
2. In an early chapter you mention Edward has a sister, Alice, who lives in Paris. In this latest chapter, Emmet mentions he never had a sister, which confused me. Is this a plothole?
So thanks again for creating this excellent story and putting so much time and effort into it! I would really love it if you could continue it, but I understand that real life gets in the way sometimes. You probably have a good reason for not updating in 2 years. Hope you're doing well :)
| SlashGrrl chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
| catbob1 chapter 18 . 12/4/2013
Oh, my dear sweet baby Jesus! You can NOT leave the story here! It's been almost a year. You must come back and finish this story. Please. As a Christmas gift to your fans. Please. Pinky swear I'll be your friend. I want the happy ending you promised.
| RebelSkies chapter 18 . 12/4/2013
My heart is broken...why would you do that! Do not let it end like this please!
| Made-in-Denmark chapter 18 . 10/25/2013
Okay... this is like the worst place EVER to abandon your fic... Come on!
| Guest chapter 18 . 9/21/2013
Wat!? NOOOO! U GOTTA KEEP GOING! HOW DARE YOU!
| angeltrin1 chapter 18 . 4/26/2013
You stopped here! Ahhhhhhhh! I need to know that Edward and Jasper are going to be alright!
| Tlcatlady chapter 18 . 4/21/2013
please, please update soon! My friend rec'd this in one of her stories and she was so right to do so. You've written an amazingly real and complex emotional story and I really look forward to the hea you promise. Thanks to "I think I needed that" for the heads up! TLC
| aidabye chapter 18 . 4/17/2013
Please continue the story. Looking for the happy ending.
| aidabye chapter 14 . 4/16/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Finally they admitted they love each other. Love the story.
| aidabye chapter 12 . 4/16/2013
Esme is wonderful. Drop James of cliff please!. Edward is an angel,and Jasper is so sad. I was so proud of Jasper, he did the right thing.
| aidabye chapter 11 . 4/16/2013
I love the way Jasper calls Edward his redhead, it's so sweet. I'm glad Jacob and Sam gave Jasper a chance, and a job. A little kindness goe's a long way.
| aidabye chapter 8 . 4/16/2013
oh no not that horrible James. Seth and Edward to funny for words.