|Reviews for From the Ashes|
| Guest chapter 68 . 12/6/2017
Dude ..I finished it already and I want more ..yes im a sucker for m!cousland/leliana because there's so little of them in fanfic and fan art although i dont mind other males with leliana of course ..lol ..pls continue it I beg you T_T
| justjoe chapter 68 . 7/31/2017
This was a tremendous story. I could hardly stop reading. There were a few grammatical errors throughout, but they weren't severe enough to ruin the story.
My only problem was the epilogue. Given the changes made during this story, simply including the game text was really out of place. In fact, I didn't like anything about the final chapter.
Again, great story. Poor epilogue.
| TheDarkChronist chapter 34 . 6/8/2017
*whistles* And I'm only halfway throught this... this is really my favourite DA story ever. Good work, mate
| keller.blair1 chapter 68 . 1/12/2017
Good story but the Amell never deserved that honor of being the hero
| Nigiri chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
I have just started reading and I'm still at the beginning of this NOVEL. But the chapters that I've read so far are so amazingly well written, wow. It feels like a real book to me, like as if I've never known the game but am only discovering the story now ... It's a shame I didn't come across this any sooner. I can't wait for Leliana/Arthur relationship to blossom and I can't wait - and I mean I CAN'T, I have to restrain myself before I spoil everything - to find out whether or not Arthur survives and will have future adventures or. Now before I indluge in more reading, Thank you so much for writing this, it is greatly appreciated!
| thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 10/11/2014
i hope im wrong, but arthur already seems like a bit of a gary stu
| thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
its a bit morbid for bryce to talk about his second son ruling considering what fate that implies for fergus
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
Arthur sucks for the one his reddish hair sounds a clown, dark hair is better, Arthur is a suck hero but aedan cousland is the best name and hero to be remember
| Shadow Tricked chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
good story just not my thing is all, I loved morrigan and in witch hunt my warden ( a cousland) went with her to raise the child together. he was a full paragon hero and she changed from the careless bitch to a woman in love, so much more than what your story basically tells about her. their son is destined for greatness not through an evil path in my opinion, the way she was treated through out the story really irked me but I stuck through to the end. just my opinion is all still a great read thanks
| Shadow Tricked chapter 36 . 11/10/2013
I am enjoying the story so far except that I'm a morrigan fan.. kinda seems like you dislike her.. she was my romance in most of my play through's
| Ezkutu chapter 68 . 9/17/2013
(...) Wow! Just wow! Took me 3 days to finish reading but DAMN if it wasn"t worth it. You made your fic as epic as the game that inspired you, if not more. Wonderful adaptation of the game, I love how you've filled the "blanks" between missions that existed in the game. Now for the sequel...
| TheProwler chapter 68 . 8/2/2013
i wish i could have found this story sooner what an amazing story i loved it the circle of magi the deep roads the landsmeet and the final battle was my favorite story arcs in this story also i enjoyed how you included some of the other origins in this story that was clever and original i just wished that you didnt kill arabella but it made so much sense in how you did it and it really surprised me i was like whaaaaaaaaat overall great story i hope to see more of arthur cousland's story
| jarrettadamsn3rd chapter 68 . 7/12/2013
Beautiful, brutal, and well-written, I view this as superior to the game! My only problems with the writing is that Arthur can be a little long-winded, but other than that, perfect!
| JSouth chapter 37 . 5/28/2013
Quote from Adpetes Astartes, very nice! Loved the story, best fanfic that I have read!
| jedimaster01 chapter 68 . 5/5/2013
Its a long time since my last rewiev, but i was alway there when you uploaded a new
chapter of this great story.
Its been a long time since you started and at least its been come to a great end.
Thanks for your hard work and for your time in which you entertained us. :-)
Hoping soon for the continuing story.
Thank You Arthur