Reviews for Across The Clear Water
Hrvatska chapter 1 . 1/30/2011
lol Bosnians whining about every thing. Is just like real life !
Summary of your awful fanfic chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
-Summary of your awful fanfic 'Across The Clear Water'-

Bosnian Eurovision Rejects: Hey, we were in the Yugoslavian Wars, let's angst over it.

*Several depressing, whiny paragraphs later*

Policeman: Hey, enough of your angst. I need to tell you to move from here because the author has no idea how to advance the plot along.

Bosnian Eurovision Rejects: Awww...

*The Bosnian Eurovision Rejects move somewhere else*

Bosnian Eurovision Rejects: The Yugoslav Wars were awful. Oh, hey, remember all that bullshit that happened in Pokevision? Let's angst over that now instead!

-They whine about the events in the even worse fanfiction 'Pokevision'-

-Even more whining-

Bosnian Eurovision Rejects: Oh hey, it's getting pretty late now, and the author has ran out of ideas, let's all go home.

-They do just that-

The End.
Anon chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
What's 'PVR'? It's in no fandom that I've ever heard of. I don't get around much though. You should put your fics in 'whatever fandom this is''s category.
Anonymous chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
None of this story makes any sense to me? Who are these people? Why are they all talking about the yugoslav wars if this story is set 20 years after it happened? What in the heck is the PVR? Why is the river off bounds?