|Reviews for Ah, Quidditch|
| Anonymouskokok chapter 23 . 4/11/2015
I'm really sorry if this happens to bother you, but I felt like it had to said. First of all, your OC mentions not getting raped (which confused me because I personally find rape to be any sexual assault). So I dediced to look it up in the dictionary and what came up was,
unlawful sexual intercourse or any other sexual penetration of the vagina, anus, or mouth of another person, with or without force, by a sex organ, other body part, or foreign object, without the consent of the victim.
an act of plunder, violent seizure, or abuse; despoliation; violation:"
Second of all, it's very unrealistic that your oc doesn't seem very traumatized. I apologize if I'm wrong, but I'd think a rape victim would want to avoid contact with males after getting raped (or it can go backwards if raped by a female). What I mean to say is that it doesn't seem right for her to still be very close to Harry after being treated horribly by draco. I guess her view on males would be changed by the event after being exposed to that abuse, but perhaps I'm wrong and I deeply apologize if I am.
I understand that you wrote your story as it is because it needed something exciting (I'm not saying the rape was exciting, I feel far from that). Also, I can't seem to understand draco doing this. I know he joined the dark lord and was Harry's enemy through the whole series, but it's not like he went to the dark side willingly (I assure you he didn't get any cookies). He acted as he did in the books because of his father's expectations. In the DH, we saw how Draco truly didn't want to join Voldemort and the death eaters but did anyways for his family. In the epilogue we also got shown the understanding harry had for Draco (plus, they didn't seem to be in bad terms). What I mean to say is that this isn't Rowling's Draco, but your Draco. He's very occ, but that's normal in fanfictions.
I know you won't change your story based on this review, but as I said in the begginig of my ranting, I just thought this needed to be said.
I'm truly sorry if I turn out to be ill informed.
| Love.Fiction.2016 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
| Lee Gold chapter 9 . 5/21/2013
"Go home, terrorist!"
Please tell me you are quoting AVPM with that? Lol
| marauderette-mooney chapter 30 . 10/13/2012
loved it it was so awesome and romantic thanx for writing it you are an awesome writer
| lovexconspiracy chapter 30 . 5/5/2012
I really loved this story! You did a fantastic job at writing it and I think that you captured Harry's character almost perfectly. I plan on reading more from you too! Thank you for writing! -Jamie
| Guest chapter 21 . 12/27/2011
Nice story but the last 2 chapters have ruined it..terrible
| beba78 chapter 30 . 6/30/2011
That was a cute ending :)
Great story :D
I can't wait to see what you have in store for us x)
| thephantomphoenix chapter 10 . 6/26/2011
"Go home, terrorist!" and "Harry freakin' Potter" made me laugh so hard. Great story!
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 30 . 6/25/2011
stories up your sleeves? I better look up mine then. Loved the story looking forward to the next one.
| mrsyaya chapter 30 . 6/25/2011
THIS WAS A GREAT ENDING. I KNOW THAT YOU WILL CONTINUE THIS TALE WITH OTHER STORIES. LOOKING FORWAED TO MORE.
| PSay chapter 30 . 6/25/2011
Thank you so much for writing this story. I really love Harry and this is a twist that real life could have thrown at him. Of course Draco is the consumate villian in older Harry stories. Very well done. I love the way they vetted the reporters. Leaving out the lying Prophet was poetic justice. They never treated Harry well and the deserved to not be allowed at his wedding to Arlene. I really have enjoyed Arlene's character. She was different enough from Ginny to be realistic and similar enough to capture Harry's attention. He really deserved to find another love after losing Ginny. Of course her family would have bitter sweet memories on his wedding day with Arlene. He had them himself. I look forward to whatever you decide to write. next. pms
| PintoNess chapter 30 . 6/24/2011
Is Luna being Luna or can humans really only produce a tablespoon of tears per half hour? O.o
| beba78 chapter 29 . 6/14/2011
| Who Are You What Do You Want chapter 29 . 5/26/2011
that was just mean to the poor reporters. Wish i could of thought of it. I will have to remember that. great chapter
| MRSYAYA chapter 29 . 5/26/2011
GREAT TOUCH ABOUT THE OLD BOY FRIEND. GOT TO KEEP HARRY ON HIS TOES. GLAD THEY WILL HANDLE THE MEDIA TO MAKE IT THEIR DAY.