Reviews for Cold Temptation
Hotaru chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Wow! This is a great story, Iove it, especially the details and how you describe the surroundings. I can pretty feel the emotion Azuma was having at the time. I love your style of writing by the way! Thanks for the hard work 3
KYM chapter 4 . 7/8/2011
Love it! Other than a few tenses here and there, the whole story's awesome! :) I always feel that this pairing's not given enough attention. YunokiXHino FTW! :)
Yoli16 chapter 4 . 6/11/2011
sagittariusleo chapter 4 . 6/3/2011
I like Kahoko- Azuma, but I also love Aoi. His love for her was admirable. Dunno who to support now.
sagittariusleo chapter 1 . 6/3/2011
so she still alive. Why did she commit succide?
Lyndel chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
interesting. :)
Anonymous chapter 4 . 3/5/2011
NOOOOOO! It would be unfair for Kaji if the story ends with Hino and Yunoki. Yunoki didn't even know about his children and yet at the end he will get them all... Kaji, on the other hand, selflessly raised Yunoki's children. That's true love, I think. I wish Hino would move on from the past and love Kaji. I'm so depressed by the story, but it is a compliment, since you have managed to bring out such emotions from a reader.
catstop chapter 4 . 2/20/2011
I don't know why...but when the previous chapter came in the link didn't work so I thought there was an error. And it was grouped together with this latest update now...I don't know.

Anyhow, another great chapter! I've liked this fic, it has a great plot and direction. However, I didn't like the Aoi-centric part, but I've never watched the 2nd season so I don't care about the character at all. So...because of that...I can't really judge your writing on the last chapter.

(4. 3: Ripples)

Very angsty fic. I'm loving it. Keep up the good work! Thanks!
Azuma-kaho chapter 4 . 2/19/2011
Given that most readers support Len-kaho you should be delighted to even receive 2 reviews per chapter!

But I hope you continue the story anyway, although please try to correct the 'tenses' of your verbs where required.

oh, and don't make aoi suffer too much!
Orphiucus chapter 4 . 2/19/2011
darkweb47 chapter 4 . 2/18/2011
no... Dont remove this fic from this...we all azu/kaho will cry river...

Update soon...

Our loves r with u...
Calixta chapter 3 . 2/15/2011
WOW. What a wonderful storyline. Kahoko and Azuma pairing the best. Please continue.
catstop chapter 3 . 1/20/2011
Nice chapter, can't wait for the next.
KazeKirran chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
Wow! This is really good! I like it! This is Azuma/Kahoko pairing, right? So they would end up together, right?
And those twins, they really got me curious. I wonder who really is their real father...
Update soon pls, I want to read more of this story
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