Reviews for Rulebreaker
HetaPastaH3ro chapter 7 . 7/12/2012
Go Canon.
Kill Carlos (met killer)
Officer Garcia (pretty obvious his role)
Use James actual mom from the show.
Use Lucy as the one who encounters the killer.
All you have to make up is James' sister.
Also that way you won't be having too many OC's.
Music4ever1617 chapter 7 . 1/11/2011
Here's an OC for you.

Name: Emery Alexander

Category: Character encounter with the killer

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Description: Emery stands at 5'3 in height, she has medium skin color. Her eyes are almost black color but are deep blue in the light. Emery's hair is black with natural brown highlights, her hair is naturally straight and falls to her shoulders.

Personality: Emery is shy around people but she tries to be outgoing and comfortable around people. She is intelligent, unique and lovable. She cares about people around her.

Family: Emery lives with her mother and is an only child.

If you need more info on Emery PM I'l glad send you more. :)

Can't wait to read the sequel. :D
Kruegerfangurl chapter 6 . 1/5/2011
Write a sequel. This is really good!
Music4ever1617 chapter 6 . 1/4/2011
NOOOOOOO! James is dead! So depressing now! :'(

If you do a sequel which you should have James' murderer die!
mandamichelle chapter 6 . 1/4/2011
yeahh you should write a sequel...but why did james have to die? he should come back alive:)
Music4ever1617 chapter 4 . 12/31/2010
OMG OMG No one can die that would soo depressing! :'(

This is really good. Never do online dating you don't know if a person is some killer or creeper.

Can't wait to read the next one. Sorry about your cousin dropping water onto your laptop.
MyHeroRaven chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
oH WOW... This looks like it's going to get good.

I like that it's Carlos for once that is going to be

In a dangerous situation...

It's usually James.


Great job... you're writing style is cool.

Please continue!

Bigtimebitch chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
Im sure there was a hollyoaks ep like this lol

Will it be james that dies (like india) lol

awww (
Glambertnickelbackavatarfan chapter 4 . 12/27/2010
Omg! Whatt!
I C a big world chapter 4 . 12/26/2010



PIRATEofHOGWARTS chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
I can't wait for more! Please please please update soon!
JustAGirlWithAQuill chapter 3 . 12/26/2010
More! :)
4everablackrose chapter 3 . 12/26/2010
NNNNNNNNOOOOOOOO! now i am positive i know where this is going. *sob* :(
I C a big world chapter 2 . 12/24/2010
Its different

but addicting


write more...

4everablackrose chapter 2 . 12/24/2010
unfortunatly, i think i know where this is going. :(