Reviews for Pain
Kyleena chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
You're really good! You nailed the majority of those things...
That70schick chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Wow. Nice, that should be in the book! Luv the poem, goes Great with the book!
princess bookgeek chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
i really like this! dark yes but well done. my favorite part is:

"All she wants is love

All she gets is pain"

and the lines right before that are also very well done.
hoppy9000 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
wow that was really awesome
Friends5602 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I love this book. You really got the grasp of Vanessa and what she went through. It makes me wonder what actually would have done if her brother hadn't seen her and screamed. You said that you weren't a poet, I thought that you did a great job writing this. I felt like this would have been in the book. I would love to see you would write others for Conner and Tony. If you have read any of Ellen Hopkins books then I could see good poems from you.