Reviews for Substitute School, First Semester
Jordan2356 chapter 4 . 3/14
"slipped past his guard and hit his other ribcage" not trying to be a dick but iv'e seen a few mistakes like that in this story and its only chapter four so you might want to get a beta reader
tanithlipsky chapter 26 . 2/9
very good
apolausta chapter 25 . 4/3/2017
Genuinely one of the best Bleach fanfics I've ever read. Thank you again for writing and sharing!
apolausta chapter 16 . 3/31/2017
I usually don't comment on a work until I finish (ultimately because I fuss I'm selfish with my time) but I had to comment on this one at least once before the end. Your writing is amazing. I was struck by it and literally just paused to appreciate it during Chad's introspection. Your character development and each character's voice is just beautiful.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing this masterpiece. It genuinely deserves all the praise it can possibly receive.
Mimi chapter 13 . 8/19/2016
Why does it said June and not July?
ArgentofCintra chapter 8 . 8/11/2016
great chapter as ever :)

one minor point, And I am not pretending that I am som kind of authority on the subject, but, I would replace first name by given name, since Kuchiki is Rukias first name, and Rukia hers second, as family name precedes over given.

But I can be wrong, an please do not make me doing paperwork, that Rangiku has skipped this week :D
Glorilian chapter 25 . 7/30/2016
Greetings, dear professor!
This fic - study class :D - was very interesting, well-written. I enjoyed it. I like it plotwise and your characterization of Ichigo, Rukia and others was very nicely done. I was pleasantly surprised with your version of Central 46 (among many other things, of course).
In short, I think your fic is wonderful and good read. :o)
(Your subject is so interesting, that I am already looking forward to the next semester.) :D
Mingyu chapter 27 . 7/18/2016
Dangit! I really wish I had started this one earlier! (I usually read crossovers though) Good writing, and I like your ideas on how things could have gone.

Well, on to the Second Semester! Thanks for the fic!
QueenKarin13 chapter 2 . 6/25/2016
I wonder what will happen with his hollow.
QueenKarin13 chapter 1 . 6/25/2016
I laughed at the "I am Alfred!" I could picture it so clearly. I love how you portrayed Alfred. Even the name sounds overly innocent and goofily enthusiastic. There's a robotic character that comes to mind from somewhere else when I read Alfred, but I've forgotten who. I'm also happy that Alfred will do his job better than Kon. It always irked me how much Kon ruined Ichigo's reputation off and on screen.
Insanity NPO chapter 27 . 6/24/2016
I didn't think this day would come! Woo!
Guest chapter 26 . 1/12/2016
Omg this is an amazing story. I just read the whole thing without a break and now I am anticipating what might happen in the future story.
Aegorm chapter 12 . 12/1/2015
The problem about Rukia not being powerlessness is that her character isn't going to develop in the same way. She will most likely stay colder and more duty bound than in canon.

Both Renji and Byakuya will also have their development slowed which is a shame.

Ichigo seems rather weak to me. He has real training in this story but his progress seems rather slow. He learned Shunpo from Yuroichi in 3 days while also getting his Bankai, he was able to defeat Renji after just a couple of days with Urahara. Now it seems that he is barely progressing at all.
Born-From-Black-Lightning chapter 25 . 7/10/2015
Wow great chapter and great story. I'm sorry that I'm just reviewing this last chapter but I just am.
Now what I have to say is what I imagine what pretty much most reviewers have said.
Like Ichigo's progress I liked it a lot. And how Zangetsu has a sealed form in this one. I also like its release command. Now I have read a story or two where Zangetsu is sealed like in this story. And when I see Zangetsu seals usually his release command is Protect and that fits both Ichigo and Zangetsu. Zangetsu wanting to protect Ichigo and Ichigo wanting to protect his friends and family well that and you know the innocent and what not. But I like rise as well it also fits with Zangetsu's name.
A combo of both would be cool like Rise up and Protect, ZANGETSU!
Damn straight. And I'm going of track. Anyway ya great story it saddens me though just for the fact that because u have not released a 2nd semester fic and its been 3years after u officially put up this last chapter that I have to conclude that you will most likely not write a 2nd semester and I'm saddened greatly by it but I love it anyway and ill follow u in hope of you posting a 2nd semester.
Well I'm Off to read more fanfic's and maybe just maybe ill read ya another time eh?
Ps- I'm not Canadian eh! Although I do love eh!
mustbeatuesday chapter 25 . 5/10/2015
I hope there's more soon... this is such a good story!
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