Reviews for Pursuit and Capture
Chaisy chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Wow, that was fantastic!

I really like a Ron and anyone else but Hermione fanfiction and yours was very well written.

I find your style compelling and interesting )

Thanks!

Write more with Ron please xx
The Hapless Quill chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
This was fantastic! I kept snorting at Lavender's remarks about Hermione (My mum thought I had a nosebleed or something) and I adored the last line. You write it really well and I can't believe it hasn't got more reviews. Nice job!
MBP chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
Ahhh wow. I didn't know how I'd feel about this, but I love the personality you gave Lavender here. And really, this line actually made me snort: "it must be tough to have to work hard at basic stuff when your best friends are the Boy Who Lived and the Girl Who Knows It All." This was hysterical and pretty accurate, too, I'm thinking.
dracoLover chapter 1 . 7/12/2011
Very nice! I liked how you kept it canon while showing us Lavender's thoughts and actions.
NellieNotMolly chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
Just ran into this story, for some reason, and it tickles me! What a perfect teenage girl your Lavender is! With her perfect BFF to help her in her quest! Love all the snarky nicknames, too!

Hey, I'm with one of your other reviewers: Why not write a companion piece to this from another point of view? Hermione's? Harry's? Ron's himself? Someone else's? Um, in your spare time...

Very cute story, fun to read!
Analie Janes chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
Lavender is truly an epitome of a typical teenage girl. I really like how you got in her head. Good job writing her. :)

Analie
Emery Wright chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Oh wow, you really got lavender's perspective spot-on! And she is definitely still a teenaged girl, her conversations with Paravti are great, and her jealousy of Hermione nicely done. "I like my men dark, like my coffee." made me laugh a bit because Lavender takes herself so seriously (and probably doesn't have any experience with men) but it really works. As far as constructive criticism goes, I would've liked to see what Lav's patronus is, maybe put that whole DA lesson into a scene, but it worked with just a summary of that because of the length of the story.
Dodger Gilmore chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I love this! You made Lavender a normal teenage girl - I can definitely relate to those plans of hers... And I loved the voice you gave her, it was very amusing - especially her Harry nicknames. And I love her reasons for starting to like Ron. So, yeah, great work, and I'd love to read more from her POV about the rest of their relationship...
Rita Arabella Black chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
I loved it! Poor Lavender, destined to getting hurt. Brilliant of course; I loved how you wrote it from Lav's POV and how closely it followed the book.
FirstYear chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
"Miss Frizz" lol...loved it. You write first person so seemingly effortlessly,(she sighed jealously).

I like your Lavender, she is a real person and not some flighty ding-bat, the situation (that missing scene from the books) is perfect. Well done.
my best enemy chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Haha, this was so funny! I loved your nicknames for Harry and Hermione! And thanks for not making Lavender an obsessive, crazy stalker, like most people do. I really liked it :)
silverbirch chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
A new story from you is indeed a timely present!

Well done on this one. Why, on Earth, she ever fancied him is still a mystery to me, but this was a good effert.

In the Bible it says "For what man knoweth the things of a man, save the spirit of man which is in him?" Even they didn't try to decipher women! ;)

I loved her little names for Hermione, too. It certainly brought out the sense of competition. Do we get to see the other end of the relationship?

Another wonderful story I thoroughly enjoyed.

Happy Christmas, by the way.
lightblue-Nymphadora chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Awesome! Thank you! I liked how you made Lavender less psychotic :). And I liked "Harry-Who's-Now-Quidditch-Captain-On-Top-of-Everything-Else"... Well done!
respitechristopher chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Once again, this was just perfect for the recipient. I loved the first-person narration, and seeing Lavender presented so humanly, but not giving her a pass on the conniving was a brilliant stroke of genius.
xxxCattxxx chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
This is a very interesting story! Good work :) keep writing :P xx