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Iceberry2666 chapter 1 . 2h
cute little wstuff .
julamei chapter 1 . 5/27
this is beautiful! natsu doesn't feel ooc at all, so great job : )
rebibecky chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
that last sentence was so cute!
amkhe chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
nah, you got natsu perfectly ;) i loved it!
floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Sweet! :)
moon strut chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
It was an adorable oneshot, and I enjoyed every bit of it!
I also think it's so adorable that Natsu loves going to Lucy's apartment.
This couple is such a tease, I swear.
Nice job, though.
Sakura478 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Cute nice story
piggycat350 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
omg your writing is fricking awesome!

i totally love your stories and esp reading them in Natsu's POV! Please don't stop writing and keep them coming! D
chit catt chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Fluff and beautiful. He's not OOC, not even in a single sentence. I dunno what else I gotta say... I put this on my fave. Love it!
Queen of Narnia49 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Such... Sweet.. NaLu-ness!

Gah, I want to sing and dance and cry at the same time. It was really... well, beautiful.

I can see how Natsu's pov would be difficult to write; he doesn't show much emotions or anything.

Great work!

-Queen of Narnia49
Raffee chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Waaah such a lovely fanfic!
Kouyan chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
It turned out well. :)
polished polkadots chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
EEEE~ So lovely and adorable and so full of sweetness and subtle (or not so?) romance hints that I simply adore. :'D

Thanks for sharing!
Ice of the Kitsune's Fire chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
D'awwww. Much love.
she is a firework chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Nngh, this is adorable.

I can totally imagine Lucy vanishing & Natsu being all like "DEWD WTF D:" but not. Your writing style is very pretty. :D

Keep up the good work!
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