|Reviews for Visits|
| Iceberry2666 chapter 1 . 2h
cute little wstuff .
| julamei chapter 1 . 5/27
this is beautiful! natsu doesn't feel ooc at all, so great job : )
| rebibecky chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
that last sentence was so cute!
| amkhe chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
nah, you got natsu perfectly ;) i loved it!
| floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
| moon strut chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
It was an adorable oneshot, and I enjoyed every bit of it!
I also think it's so adorable that Natsu loves going to Lucy's apartment.
This couple is such a tease, I swear.
Nice job, though.
| Sakura478 chapter 1 . 10/27/2012
Cute nice story
| piggycat350 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
omg your writing is fricking awesome!
i totally love your stories and esp reading them in Natsu's POV! Please don't stop writing and keep them coming! D
| chit catt chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Fluff and beautiful. He's not OOC, not even in a single sentence. I dunno what else I gotta say... I put this on my fave. Love it!
| Queen of Narnia49 chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Such... Sweet.. NaLu-ness!
Gah, I want to sing and dance and cry at the same time. It was really... well, beautiful.
I can see how Natsu's pov would be difficult to write; he doesn't show much emotions or anything.
-Queen of Narnia49
| Raffee chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
Waaah such a lovely fanfic!
| Kouyan chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
It turned out well. :)
| polished polkadots chapter 1 . 5/2/2011
EEEE~ So lovely and adorable and so full of sweetness and subtle (or not so?) romance hints that I simply adore. :'D
Thanks for sharing!
| Ice of the Kitsune's Fire chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
D'awwww. Much love.
| she is a firework chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
Nngh, this is adorable.
I can totally imagine Lucy vanishing & Natsu being all like "DEWD WTF D:" but not. Your writing style is very pretty. :D
Keep up the good work!