Reviews for Christmas Surprise
Ummmmmm chapter 1 . 10/10
You made orihime a bit too ooc in this and it c
Kinda made it awful
AngelSlayer135 chapter 1 . 4/9
Another good story, dialog still a bit rough at times and Ichigo seems OOC with some of the stuff he says but overall nice lemony freshness.
Ralph chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
I totally want to see a part two good job!
Scorpio2696 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Willing to be a beta reader 4 ya, contact
Dr. Armadeus Von Beardicus chapter 1 . 7/31/2013
Shoulda had ichigo wake up and attack his father.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Hey this was great tell the new one is out
Dark Lord Ganondorf chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
Ahahaha. Lucky Ichigo! How long will it be before he's got a few more women in his bed, I wonder?
KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
Averrix Trapelle chapter 1 . 3/1/2012
mindmaster123 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
warprince2000 chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next Story you write (update soon Plz)
Kage Bijuu chapter 1 . 10/19/2011
This is a very epic lemon that for sure and I like the what you called Paizuri.
Sroxs chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I think I'm drooling! I reckon you should write a halloween one and add Kukaku! That would be an epic one.
Avatar of the Azure Dragon chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
great job on the foursome try to do more of these in the future espially with BLEACH!
HimesInu chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Not big on more than three people at a time, as it can get very confusing when writing and reading, but that wasn't bad. I do have one qustion. Why not Soi Fon? Or did she actually stick you with her blade for even thinking it?

Fine, that was two questions. Sue me.
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