Reviews for Shooting Stars and Soccer Balls
Eto117 chapter 1 . 11/21/2013
I've never seen a meteor shower. Too much light and it hides the stars. I have a feeling Scorpius would eventually learn how to play soccer well. I liked the ending :)
Jill Juniper chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Yes, it is I. Who is being lazy and won't log in. Bah.

"kneepads." ...You don't play football, do you? Shinguards. They're called shinguards.

Anyway, aw, this was cute. ) If you can't tell, I'm reading your Lily fics to get an idea of how you view Lily so I can try to portray her in a way you'll enjoy in my fic. Speaking of which, it's back to work on that.

G'day!

-Jill
ForeverMrs.Padfoot chapter 1 . 7/22/2011
adorable :D
nwyd chapter 1 . 6/23/2011
...exploding house? Fascinating. That I'd like to see I love this story:D And just the way it's written (this applies for all your stories I've read) ScorpiusLily3
it would be reyna chapter 1 . 4/11/2011
i love the title :)) Just for alliteration's sake, huh? I love the story. I love the way you ended it best. :)
whippetgurl chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
Hey! Soooo since I had no idea that I didn't finish R&Ring this...here we go! :D &hearts

Haha, I love how the USA is the only country that calls it soccer. xD wth? seriously!

Aw, poor Scorpius is so confused...aaaaand so is Albus. Haha they're so funny.

LOL LILY! She brings up a valid point. ;)

Haha, Scorpius is now Lily's guinea pig! /squeak!/ XD his HOUSE nearly SPLODED?

OHmyGOD this makes me love Lily way too much xD &hearts

Hehe. Of COURSE she manages to talk him into it. xD

LOL favorite line in this section: "'Scorpius,' she says fondly, if a bit exasperatedly. 'Just shut up and kick, would you?'" However, I think the period after "exasperatedly" should be a comma, and "Just" shouldn't be capitalized. :) Just saying haha &hearts

LOL dude I freaking love Lily. You write her so well! I think my favorite fic of yours with her in it was probably the one with the rainbow hair and how she ran away from home and how Lorcan finds her. I forgot what it's called though. But I really loved that one! This one's awesometastic also though. :)

xD Okay, no, THIS is my favorite line. "'Your wish, my command, Strawberry,' he says, sketching her a bow as best he can while sitting down." That's just so... /Scorpius./ xD perfect!

AWW! I love how sweet it is! :D Spearmint, always spearmint with Scorpius! x)

Haha I love the "scoring goals" part :)

This was really well written! I like how Lily is written. Honestly, this isn't my favorite fic of yours, but it's still well written. The only thing I don't really like is that the meteor shower and soccer/football don't really go together x) Other than that, this is great! Keep on writing! &hearts
StarUponHeaven chapter 1 . 12/29/2010
Like I've said before: I love your stories :)

Though you made one error, on purpose or not: isn't Ginny supposed to be Mrs. Potter now? Or did you do that because she DIDNT change her name?

Anywho, I love your stories, and will be keeping a close eye on your profile in the future ;)
kingslayers chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
I liked your story though I'm always gonna have a soft spot for ScorpiusandRose your story was believable :)
AlexLovesHufflepuff chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
Awwwwww! Loved it!
sidex chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
the 'bell' prompt seemed a bit thrown-in, but besides that, this is great! you're quickly becoming one of my favorite fanfic authors. :)

do you mind giving me the link to the Next Gen Fanatics forum? i'd be really grateful.
carol chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Love the history! Love Lily/Scorpius!

Love your stories! Love yours Lily/Scorpius!

Love you!
NRC chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
You write really good stories, you know? Your nextgens are so strong and defined for characters who are built on fanon. It's really really wonderful that you can create them with only their parents as basis. ]

The beginning bit was a little confusing ( for me, because I like little details like who's on who's team P ), but the rest is just... beautiful. Your characters are so alive and real, and the plot is funny and sweet and believable, especially the Harry bit P

Love love love.

And author-fave ]
Dream Killing Keith chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
It was really cute. I've never been much of the NextGen fan until I stumbled upon your profile, and I have to say I like it. It is really kind of realistic yet innocent which seems hard to find on fanfiction. Keep it up.
Persephone's flower chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
And you really seem to like LilyScorpius, don't you? (; Unfortunately, I ship him with Rose. (which I know you definitely loathe. :D)

"Roxanne smacks Lysander and kisses him..." Ahaha. I loved that, and how you put little bits of other characters is absolutely fantastic. I adored how Scorpius seems to have a weak spot for Lily, especially when she bats her eyelashes and smiles. I thought that was adorably cute, as are all your others when you have the characters in their young stages. (;

Only thing is, I'm not sure if the Wizarding World even believes in religion, or God, for that matter. That's why they have Merlin, isn't it? I dunno, just wondering. :D

It's pretty funny how Scorpius is awful at soccer. The prompts were really well used, and I had to read them through a few times to find them, because they worked so well. The whole theme is absolutely adorable and once again, you make Lily and Scorpius an adorable couple to read. I did enjoy it. :D

The ending line was gorgeous - about his goals having nothing to do with football.

Lovely.

Persephone
Ninja Potter chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Omgg, you're 49th! Anyways, I simply adore, lurve, love, melt for Lily/Scorpius! I loved this Scorpius and I love that Lily used her charm on him! Gosh, it was awesome and supermegafoxyawesomehot, as Ames would say. Great job, as always D
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