|Reviews for Leaving Normal|
| Dot chapter 1 . 9/12/2002
Wow, this was so beautifully written. So vivid and eloquent. My english teacher would love your use of imagery! :) Good job and keep it up!
| Nevermore chapter 1 . 5/1/2002
Brunn McK told me you're an author definitely worth checking out, and I agree. First I'll give my one criticism (you'll get used to this if I review more), and then I'll proceed to sing your praises. I just found the presentation somewhat unwieldy... 'Buffy does this, Buffy does that...' Reads more like stage instructions in a play, sorta like narration. That's a minor point, though.
Now, as for everything else... it was fantastic. Your writing possesses a poetic quality that makes every description seem more vivid than I'm used to reading. Excellent work. The characters also seem to have more depth than most writers care to bother with. You really seem to put a lot of thought into this, and I don't think I saw a single typo or grammatical error... I love it when people demonstrate attention to detail. Great job on this, I look forward to reading more of your fics.
| Queen Akasha1 chapter 1 . 4/8/2002
Great story. Love Spike/Dawn interaction. All your stuff is good.
| Cypherwulf chapter 1 . 3/30/2002
| Ellen chapter 1 . 3/27/2002
Gorgeous story. The Buffy introspection is shear artistry in terms of your prose. You made me want to shed a tear at the end - poignant and bittersweet.
| Estepheia chapter 1 . 3/18/2002
Very nice language. Quite poetic. Definitely worth reading.
| pokey chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Nice, ansty and sweet at the same time. Where has all the Spike/Dawn friendshippyness gone anyways and how do we get it to come back.
| Jesse chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Again, really great! I loved it. Posted it on my site - let me know if this is a bad thing. ;)
| Sib chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
This was really sweet, I'm such a sucker for the Dawn/Spike bonding moments.
| Herself chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Lovely, elegant, with a very satisfying ending.
Maybe a teensy bit schmoopy, but easy to forgive that.
| Delirium chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Artfully created character study. Very well-constructed and a *very* enjoyable read.
| dawn chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Absolutely loved it.
| Bwit chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
aw, I liked it. I was wondering if anyone would call her on it in future episodes(like dawn and xander..maybe, hopefully..) heh. rawr xx
| Alee chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
That was lovely, one of the best fics I've ever read here, completely perfect in it's simplicity. You have a talent... I would love to see this scene, it's so true to the show. Thank you.
| Lenore chapter 1 . 3/15/2002
Really good job! Sweet,... and can you write for the show? The way things are going I think you would do it right and keep the edge too. Keep writing, you're good.