Reviews for Her First Time
Guest chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
good
nanny765 chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
good
gemma loves edward chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Hi this is anotherone your stories which I haved loved you are great writer :) love gem
jennayg123 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Loved your little story! I thought it was perfect and so sweet :)
twirob chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
it was a decent first lemon attempt thanks for sharing and good luck with this story in the competition :)
amwine chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Very sweet! Great job...thanks so much!
Andi 31 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
that was some hot meadow edward bella deflowering
TeamAllTwilight chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
pretty good first lemon if you ask me! Good luck in the contest!
RobstenLove10 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
it was juicy, but very romantic! liked it a lot

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