Reviews for The Prince's Harem
unlikely2 chapter 9 . 6/6
Horrible and very funny.
Sleepygirl68 chapter 13 . 5/22
I almost did not read this story as I hate stories written in the "first" person.
You managed to draw me in enough that I decided to read it anyway.
I'm glad I did, as it was a great story!
Thanks for writing and sharing your stories with us!
SaiyaCat chapter 13 . 2/3
aawww
Right What Is Wrong chapter 13 . 11/23/2017
...I'm confused about exactly how that worked, with the prophecy, but maybe this IS a fic with late-July-birthday!Severus.

Great fic. Hilarious, and then very ingenious in the post-Hogwarts phase. Novel, amusing, and satisfying. And complete! A rarity on ff dot net... :P
Right What Is Wrong chapter 12 . 11/23/2017
VOLDEMORT THE DIVINATION USER?

I honestly never thought of that. It goes a long way towards explaining why he jumped at the Prophecy...

Oh damn. Everything set up for a staged prophecy, and Trelawney pulls off the only true prophecy of her life. Oh dear... I presume this isn't a fic in which Severus incidentally has a late July birthday?
Right What Is Wrong chapter 11 . 11/23/2017
What did Scorpius ever do to you? ;) (I always found "Hugo" worse...)

And yes, the Dementor banquet spree! I never understood why Dementors weren't regarded as the ideal Horcrux-disposal mechanism...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 10 . 11/23/2017
Ah, a nice chapter. Good!Lucius is AU, but a nice change.

Interesting...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 9 . 11/23/2017
...

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My experiences as a video game player enable me to find this more hilarious than disturbing. Kudos on an extremely inventive Death-Eater-kill method. Using items for unintended purposes may result in unnerving glitches.

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On the other hand, my experiences with video game glitches enable me to imagine this in PERFECT graphical detail, so... wow...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 8 . 11/23/2017
Oh dear.

And so the Legend of Severus Snape grows...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 7 . 11/23/2017
MORE draconic detentions? After that, I would think McGonagall would hastily ask Professor Binns to sub in for her at all detentions. No use having Sirius go 'Yes, Professor McGonagall, punish me MORE! :D'
Right What Is Wrong chapter 4 . 11/20/2017
Scrimgeour! :D What an unexpected and delightful surprise.

Awesome. Great chapter - though poor Angela...
Right What Is Wrong chapter 3 . 11/20/2017
I personally figured that the HBP's Potions book was modified by two people - Lily for the Potions, Snape for the actual spells. (I take Harry and Hermione's arguing over whether the notes were from a boy or a girl as a hint that there was more than one person involved.) I find it suspicious that A) Slughorn warbles about Lily's ability and not Snape's, B) Professor Snape never suggests improvement to by-the-book Potions formulas, which one might expect from someone who was capable of improvement on textbook formulas *as a student*, and C) Snape, while competent at Potions, is so passionate and effective at teaching Defense that Hermione compares him to Harry - the canon Defense prodigy. Notes like "Just shove a bezoar down their throat" also seem more in-character for someone as aggressive and forthright as Lily, rather than a strict and scholarly type like Snape. For those reasons, I guessed at a timeline of Lily gifting Snape the book before OWLs, perhaps for Christmas.

If we're to take it as canon that Snape authored all the notes in the HBP book, then yeah, Lily was living off his ability.

Snape correctly guessing the Marauders were Animagi was hilarious. They're fucked. I wonder if he's going to realize what exactly happened the night of the Prank?
Right What Is Wrong chapter 2 . 11/20/2017
Hooray for Angela Prescott!

This chapter was hilarious. Snape finally lives up to the reputation of Slytherin House.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 1 . 11/20/2017
The explanation about Levicorpus actually goes a looooooong way towards explaining why Snape snapped.

I've long thought Marauders-accidentally-revealing-a-very-well-endowed Snape would make an amusing crackfic, and here it is, so I should read it. :P
Mycreativeoutlet chapter 13 . 11/9/2017
I loved this story! Is there/will there be a sequel?
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