|Reviews for d3: max's odessy|
| SSJ4Takeru chapter 13 . 8/12/2002
Yo! Awesome series here. I liked how you brought a little gundam to the series.
Jusat read your sneek peak and it sounds good! I'm going to be checking that out now!
This has been a good sequel, but I'm sure this will turn out to be an awesome trilogy.
| SSJ4Takeru chapter 9 . 8/10/2002
Awesome! Max is definitely the bad ass of the series. First Beelzebumon, then Zhuiqaomon and now the D-Reaper. I like the way you made D-Reaper an actual "being" rather than a big blob mass. Keep it up!
| SSJ4Takeru chapter 4 . 8/8/2002
Great as usual. I really enjoyed the fight between Pikkan and Max! Truly a classic. I'm looking forward to seeing Tamers finally meeting Max. I'll keep on reading.
| Lonewalker chapter 13 . 8/8/2002
Well, this was interesting. Let me guess, you read all the dragon ball books or saw all the shows. Man, first a Cell wanna-be now a Buu wannabe? Do you want to kill everyone? Because I've seen what Buu can do and it ain't pretty. Just do me one favor: KILL KAZU.
| Lonewalker chapter 8 . 8/8/2002
Thankyouthankyouthankyou. No crossbreeding. I'm relieved as you can get. Good story so far, but man, why didn't you kill Kazu?
| Lonewalker chapter 6 . 8/8/2002
Ouch. Takato does not nead a beating by Goku. That's just painful. It's a good story... not as good as the one before it, but its okay. The only thing I find disturbind is the Renamon liking max thing. I don't care if he's half digimon, he's still human to me. If he does something with her, Keke is going to beat him up.
| DigiDestined of Courage chapter 13 . 4/24/2002
"The True Threat," huh? True, it's not precisely what I wanted, but like you said, I'm sure I'll like it-especially if this is a force strong enough to break Takato's goggles, Kenta's glasses and practically everything made of glass. Keep up the good work on this!
| Anthony1 chapter 13 . 4/23/2002
Nice little sneak peak. Now I want to know what happens when you have the 'true threat' story out. Have that story out soon as possible. Can't wait to read it. Until then, see ya.
| DigiDestined of Courage chapter 12 . 4/23/2002
Full circle seems like a good scene to use-my usual muses would respond, but they're with you for the time being. Keep up the good work on these stories!
| Anthony1 chapter 12 . 4/22/2002
SWEET! I'm glad your done with this part of the d3 stories. Can't wait to read the next part. I have a pretty good idea what is going to happen in the next part of this trilogy. And to reply on that little thing in the end where we can pick a scene for the next story, I think you should put SCENE 2: ASENDANT 1...2...3? part in.
Email me when the next story comes out (which I hope will be soon). Until then, see ya.
| DigiDestined of Courage chapter 11 . 4/22/2002
DC: That phrase-pie, it doesn't mean what I think it means, does it? (grins evilly)
Takato: (blushes heavily) What are you talking about? I have no clue what you mean!
Guilmon: Then why is your face all red, Takatomon?
Takato: (blushes even harder) GUILMON!
DC: (laughs) Loved the final chapter, keep up the good work on this, e-mail me when you post up the next one and RUKATO FOREVER! Now I'm gonna go before Rika gets here.
Rika: Before who gets here?
DC: YAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH! (runs off)
Rika: What's wrong with him?
Takato: The usual-being beaten up by you for every chapter in which I'm brutally beaten up, captured or maimed has taken its toll on him.
| AnT chapter 11 . 4/21/2002
Cool. But when Takato said he got pie, did he meant potang pie? THEY'RE TOO YOUNG FOR THAT!
Max Snail: Who you reviewing?
Me: Max Acorn.
Max Snail: The dude with the other Max that called me a pussy in one of our stories?
Max Snail: Oh...YOU LITTLE JACK-ASS! YOU CALL ME A PUSSY? I'LL KICK YOUR ASS! (Reaches for the button on my computer to activate the portal to the Nexus Tower Remlm. I stop him.)
Me: Calm down. He was just high with Towele. He didn't mean it. I heard his girlfriend smacked him for it.
Max Snail: I DON'T GIVE A RAT'S ASS! WHEN I GET OVER TO HIS UNIVERSE, I'LL...!
(Terra grabs him, and kiss him passiontaly.)
Max Snail: Uh...wha..? I have no idea what I was doing!
Terra: Gets him everytime.
Me: Anywise, I apoligize for that.
Max Snail: (Still dazed...sort of.) I love you, Denese Richard.
Terra: WHAT! (Gives him a choke hold)
Chiller: Max is such an idiot.
Me: Actually he purpess so that she'll do that.
Mallory: I don't get why Max loves for her to hurt him.
Me: Take a closer look.
(Terra still giving him a choke hold, but actually squezzing him to her breats while really masaging his shoulders. Max groans in delight like Homer Simpson and drools.)
Chiller: (Makes a miscevelous look to Mallory) I love you, Jan...
Mallory: Don't even try, or I'll kick you in the balls.
Chiller:(thinking: Max is so lucky.) You wanna kick Takato's ass?
| Anthony1 chapter 11 . 4/20/2002
The best way I can explain how I like this story is this: FUCKING SWEET! I'm glad you had that little moment where Max went to see the others. Especially between him and Keke. Can't wait to read the next part.
| DigiDestined of Courage chapter 10 . 4/20/2002
DC: "See, Gogglehead-you're stronger than you know." (busts up laughing)
Takato: And what's so funny? I just got beat up by practically all the WWF superstars!
DC: Not all of them, but most of them were busy, so our mutual friend-who pulled off an impressive chapter, by the way-only contacted the famous ones.
Rika: See-you had courage to even take on The Rock. Now-open wide.
Takato: You'll pay for this one day.
DC: Not likely. RUKATO FOREVER!
| Anthony1 chapter 10 . 4/19/2002
Son of a Bitch. That was awesome chapter. I didn't expect that you would put The Rock and the WWF roster on MA's CORNER. Keep the new chapters coming. I want to see what happens next.
The Rock: You heard the man. Update soon. If you smell, what The Rock is cooking.