|Reviews for My Bodyguard: Anxieties|
| Kimmy chapter 3 . 2/3/2011
Yay! More "My Bodyguard" fics! Think I'm going to go watch the movie now (for like the hundreth time). Thanks so much!
| Erzsebeth Bathory chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
This was a very insightful chapter. With the brief background you offered, it mades sense why Moody acted out. Funny, because I was working on a sort of background fic for Moody about why he acted the way he did in school. I also gave him a big brother, ha, ha. XD Great minds think alike, huh? I'll have to go back to it one of these days. Anyway, back to your chapter. The action scene was like reading a scene right out of the movie itself. The way Cliff and Ricky saved Moody was pretty heroic. It's understandable why Cliff would lash out at Moody (after all, look at what he did to him in the movie and in this story alone) but leave it to Ricky to be calm and rational about the situation. You definitely showed a great deal of maturity within Ricky when he mentioned to Cliff about Moody having the potential as a person. Very wise! Now I can't wait for the conclusion. Excellent job as always.
| Erzsebeth Bathory chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
You do such a great job with writing teenage awkwardness. I remember when you had the kids in the basement at Evie's house, the shy touches and glances stolen; now here we are at the school dance with the couples dancing in the middle of the gym, with the anticipation of relationships in the air. You capture the moments so well! Like Shelly mentioning how she had to wear flats so she wouldn't be so tall for Clifford. You've really built up Evie's character and fleshed her out into a three dimensional character. And poor Cliff! It looks like he's going to pay for what he did to Moody (but we all know Moody deserved it, LOL). Cliff's big talk can't get him out of this situation... at least until we find out what happens in the next chapter? I swear, this was like a special Christmas present being able to read these. Wonderful job as always!
| Erzsebeth Bathory chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
You have no idea how happy this made me when I saw the alert for this fic in my inbox. I was eagerly awaiting the next installment of your Ricky/Evie series and of course, I was not left disappointed. You have such a grasp over Ricky's characterization. You can have him be mellow one moment and then erupt into anger the next so fluidly, yet be so confused and intimidated, despite his size, about what lies beyond the rumors about him. Evie's such a calming influence over Ricky. I really adore these two. Is it wrong that every time I see your character, I can't help but think, "OMG, Jennifer Beals and Adam Baldwin are HOT together." Ha, ha. I read both chapters but I wanted to go back and read a review for the first chapter. Great job!
Oh, and the Clifford/Shelly moments are just too adorable. Really, every time I saw them interacting I was going "Awww!" and yet it didn't go overkill on cute moments you put into the story. It was just the right amount to make me smile.
| vandevere chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
Sounds like the baddies have something planned...
Hope our boys make it out okay...