Reviews for The Last Straw
BlueMoonLove1999 chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
I had already favorited this story, and was looking back on it and decided to leave a review :D I really loved the story, and I'm really shocked that you haven't played Pokemon. It was funny and sexy at the same time, so kudos to you for being able to pull it off ;) I swear you could do a really great Originalshipping fic (GreenxRed) if you put in the time. Keep up the good work :)
Sigrid.Vakarian chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
Oh those last lines xD
This is great. I love it. x3
AngryMexican chapter 1 . 9/23/2013
Oh my God this is unbelievably hot. O.O
Aly-Insanity chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
Really good fic .
You did pretty great for someone who isn't familiar with the Pokemon universe , only one little thingy ;; (can't blame you for that since you don't play): Silver doesn't care for his Pokemons / only at the end of the game does he starts to. Oh well you did great after all D
Guest chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
Nosebleeds and dies in the corner
EchoSkies chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This is one of the best yaoi stories I've read so far! I'm glad I'm a yaoi fangirl! :D
TheRealMomoisme chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Anitasonia1998 chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Wow, very unexpected. Good job though.
pisceanchic101 chapter 1 . 12/4/2011
Ahaha, this story was definitely great. Not painful for me to read at all either (new yaoi fan) and entirely in character. Funny too! Nice job. :D
Ms. YaoiObsessedFangirl chapter 1 . 7/6/2011
That was amaaaaziiiiiiing! One of the best yaoi fanfics I've read. XD
EndlessStorm chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
For a story written by someone who doesn't know the characters well.. I am amazed.

This was written so well, and the chacters' personalities were perfect.

The ending made me laugh so hard xD

Good job!
JoeBananas chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
Hahahaaa yes! This was so good :D I'm just now getting into GoldxSilver (I used to not like that pairing... But now I'm getting into it lol) and I love the way you characterized Gold and Silver here.

I love the way Silver admires himself. It's definitely a Silver thing to do! XD And I couldn't stop laughing when Gold was like "I'm sorry but I have to fuck you." Hahaha that was great xD

Also, on a more serious note... I really liked your use of profanity in here. You use the word "fuck" a lot, and normally I don't really care about profanity in fanfics. It's fine if it's there, it's fine if it's not. But here, I really thought that it added to the feel of the story XD
Nokachi9494 chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
My dick... it just exploded... good show, sir. Good. Show.
Frozenbreath chapter 1 . 1/8/2011

one thing though, you're is short for you are. you should have put your instead of you're... unless you were saying you are... that made no sense D
inuliedelfenx chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Dear. God.

This is wonderful. You had me laughing throughout the entire thing.

"How dare he be BIGGER than me!"


Great Job. I'll remember this forever.
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