|Reviews for Naruto: A New Path|
| RinneTaicho chapter 21 . 9/22
I realize that this story has long since been finished, and it's not going to change, but in my opinion it's never too late for constructive criticism. I get, this is an original arc and you're proud of it, but you tried too hard. The power level of the Sound ninja is just too unrealistic. The Sound Four were the strongest ninja in the Sound Village aside from Orochimaru, Kabuto, and Kimimaro. Each of them was killed by a single genin ninja (who MIGHT have had chunin level ability at the time), who received a little help in the end in the case of Kiba and Shikamaru. Every single enemy that wasn't fodder, except for one, has taken multiple genin/chunin (most of which were one of the people to have a hand in kill one of the Sound Four) to kill them, and this Katsu is the worst of them. It's just too much. Just because Naruto is stronger than in cannon, you don't have to create characters of an unrealistic power level. Instead you should have made several characters working as a team that are weaker than the Sound Four, and had them working together fo team up against Naruto. It would have come off far more realostoc, because if Orochimaru had any of these characters in cannon, they would have been in his elite guard, and you intended to ave these characters from the start, they should have replaced the Sound Four in the invasion, because they're way more powerful.
| nenopip chapter 46 . 9/1
Kinda upset that you had everyone new and refreshing but then you went back to following canon
| aotakuperson123 chapter 2 . 8/26
| SSJ-Jolt chapter 15 . 5/29
I know Choji is a big eater but I don't think even he would be eating SHIPS.
In other words; do some proofreading.
| oppaihammer chapter 45 . 5/12
shouldnt naruto know that sasuke is out, as sasuke killed his clones..
| lucasrosa94 chapter 50 . 4/21
| MGStarFire chapter 34 . 4/7
I'm really getting tired of Sasuke getting a pass on everything he does.
Now he's going to leave the village and if he's not killed or at least declared a missing nin i'm done.
I've enjoyed this story so far even though it's not perfect but i just can't let this thing with Sasuke go.
Konoha is supposed to be a dictatorship the Hokage is supposed to have power over everyone you can't let some stupid civilians get a say in what happens to Konoha's ninja.
| MGStarFire chapter 9 . 4/6
you have no idea how angry i was when i read that Naruto won.
In my opinion and i'm no genious here but Naruto lost conciousness so do you have any idea how easy it would have been for Garra to snap his neck or cut his head of or crush him or do whatever the fuck he wanted with him.
NARUTO DID NOT WIN GAARA DID DON'T LIE TO YOUR READERS
| Croa chapter 16 . 3/30
Thank you for not over complicating but neither devaluing the transition in their relationship. You don't know how annoying uneccessary angst and drama annoys me lol
| marquis.shax chapter 49 . 3/22
heh figures Danzo has Naruto just wonder what will happen when Itachi finds out lol
| marquis.shax chapter 48 . 3/22
I really hate how so many authors do this either Naruto wins and Sasuke still gets away or he gets banished or Sasuke wins just like in canon and heads to his gay lovers Orochimaru and Kabuto which makes Kakashi sad because he was in love with the Uchiha bastard
| Akio Desusta chapter 7 . 2/17
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/3
I have to agree that this story has unlogical and pointlessley long fighting scenes.. I really like the pairing, but I would substitute half of the fighting part for a better character development
| Akio Desusta chapter 6 . 1/31
| Meazm chapter 50 . 1/31
Great story dudeeeee!