Reviews for Riven
Marlab chapter 1 . 8/13/2017
Great short story that totally captures everything Steve SHOULD be feeling. Well done !
abni chapter 1 . 4/23/2015
Awesome story, I could fully see that play out between them! Thanks for sharing with us! :)

Hugs, abni
Skimball4 chapter 1 . 4/10/2015
Only wish this was longer.:(
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
Very nice!
allanon9 chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
it's so sad but lovely.
Good job.
trevorsgm chapter 1 . 11/3/2012
I just found this story. It could, and should, have been a scene in this episode. I could hear Danny and Steve. Very nice. Thank you for taking the time to write this for us to enjoy!
FicreaderT chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Nicely done!
sorree chapter 1 . 8/25/2012
Kit Merlot chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Steve certainly carries the weight of the world on his shoulders. so good for Danny and Chin and Kono for helping to make his burden lighter.
SugarMuffin08 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
This was just awesome and again, very intense.
rivendellelve chapter 1 . 9/9/2011
What a wonderful story, it's awesome
star trek nutcase chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
Really enjoyed this, could easily see as an added scene to the actual episode. You managed to pack lots of h/c/f into a short story. Definitely look forward to more of your writing. BTW, there's a typo in last line (am s/b are).
Anon chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Very well written. Good job and thank you.
Kelcor chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Great story, Charlotte! :o) H/C while still keeping Steve and Danny in character - something I seem unable to do! LoL Very impressive! Kudos to you!

I hope you had a Merry Christmas, as well!

mary2000 chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
I would Love to read more to this story to see what eles Danyy does to make Steve feel any better!
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