Reviews for You are the Woman that I've Always Dreamed Of…
Guest chapter 8 . 10/25/2015
this story is so wounld full so experine. when l first read two chapter after that l just have read more. keep up the good work.
charlibubble chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
haha go Sara, liked the little comment at the end :D
Laura415 chapter 21 . 3/3/2011
Great Story! the storyline is one of the best I've read :D

I hope that you consider writing a story with a baby or children...maybe a follow up to this story as Sara would like to 'have a family of their own' :D
Callidus Fatum chapter 21 . 1/30/2011
Bravo. I don't remember the last time I saw so many sex sequences in one fan fiction. They're all good too. I didn't think it could be done. Some people make the mistake of having two sex scenes in their story and the second one is never as good as the first. You had what? A dozen? And they were all hot, but not nasty. I salute you. This should probably be rated M though...
Callidus Fatum chapter 20 . 1/30/2011
Haha. "I hate you." That's great.
Callidus Fatum chapter 19 . 1/30/2011
That Jacuzzi sounded suspicious from the beginning...
Callidus Fatum chapter 18 . 1/30/2011
She's not going to like having to wear another cast...
Callidus Fatum chapter 17 . 1/30/2011
You have a tendency of spelling "lose" as "loose."

This chapter is awesome, by the way.
Callidus Fatum chapter 16 . 1/30/2011
Those boys are gonna get it...
Callidus Fatum chapter 15 . 1/30/2011
I want to know what's in that box from Greg.
Callidus Fatum chapter 14 . 1/30/2011
I love that the bad guys are gay. You don't see that often.
Callidus Fatum chapter 13 . 1/30/2011
God... I wish I was having that much sex...
Callidus Fatum chapter 12 . 1/30/2011
I think I'm gonna get my girlfriend some red lingerie...
Callidus Fatum chapter 11 . 1/30/2011
You write about sex in a tasteful way. For some reason, a lot of smut writers think that their readers can't connect the dots, so they get too excited about the sex scene and it ends up like a bad porn. This is artful.
Callidus Fatum chapter 8 . 1/30/2011
Oh good, Spencer escaped. It could have been tragically romantic without him... We needed someone to rain on the parade.
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