Reviews for The Jedi Trial Series Book 2: The Jedi King
INTmanOFmystery chapter 2 . 12/30/2014
I do not believe obi-wan, since love is forbidden for a Jedi knight, would do easily give of the feelings that he had a strong love for satine let alone, the fact that he reinforced it by letting on she was more important than the others. Again it seems that obi is weak to his emotions. although satine and qui-gon do ignite an emotional nerve within obi, as we see many instances in the movies and episodes, he becomes very deft at not allowing his emotions penetrate his mind, therefore possibly sending him into a blind rage as happened in episode one when his former master was slain. We know that he is slightly afraid of as well as determined not to enter this state. Other than this minor detail , the story has me hooked and I am thrilled to read the rest
R12Fizzy chapter 18 . 6/1/2013
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
Ameliaxox chapter 18 . 2/15/2012
i love all the chapters. they are all well-written. keep it up.
LongLiveTheClones chapter 4 . 4/22/2011
Oh, I love how angry she is at him. It's because she loved him, and he loved her, and he broke up with her anyway because he is a Jedi and atttachment is forbidden, right? And, she has never forgiven him for breaking her heart?
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 18 . 4/18/2011
Awww, nice ending, and def looking forward to the Next one. I have a feeling you should introduce Sidious into that one, seeing as he sent Obi to Zigoola to kill him lol
Jedi Kay-Kenobi chapter 17 . 4/7/2011
I hope Lance keeps his hands off Satine. SHE'S OBI'S! great update, I felt so empty when you said that the next chapter will be the final one to this story. WAAAAAH! :'( *sits rocking back and forth. Great update and I look forward to the next chapter and others that you write. :)

Jedi Kay-Kenobi
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 17 . 4/7/2011
/No you ungrateful Bantha Fodder! He thought. She loves me not you!/


Good update!
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 16 . 3/26/2011
Nice update! Just watch some sentence structure; you don't have to take a new sentence each time, just try and interconnect some.

Apart from that, Nice update!
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 15 . 3/23/2011
Hm, why do I get the feeling that Lance is hiding something? That he's maybe a Separatist in secret?

So many questions need answered!
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 14 . 3/22/2011
That's good. Or...Or maybe the one with Satine dying comes true at the end...

Jedi Kay-Kenobi chapter 14 . 3/22/2011
Thank God Satine didn't die! But now what will happen in the future after that vision? What consequences will it bring possibly? Hmmm, my thoughts are still wondering around possibilities, but still at lease they didn't die. Looking forward the next chapter. :D
Lady Rey of the Scots chapter 13 . 3/16/2011

And I thought my cliffies were bad!
Jedi Kay-Kenobi chapter 13 . 3/16/2011
OMG OMG OMG! crashed! Obi-Wan alive? Jedi senses say he has to be! Oh i hope he is. This caught me completely off guard, and wow what a way to leave us all hanging like that! Evil cliffy! Great suspense on the cliffy, you have got me on the edge of my seat here. *hopping up and down, and around the room* Looking forward to more. Keep writing, amazing stuff! *Sends a small nudge of the Force for persuasion.
Jedi Kay-Kenobi chapter 12 . 3/13/2011
Yey! Good as always I enjoyed it. Shows how Jedi can easily forgive one another even if they are a rouge Jedi. I think Obi and Lance would make a good team. Keep writing!
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