Reviews for Fitting Pieces
Guest chapter 31 . 3/10
Can you please get your groove back and finish this story? I have read it multiple times and really want an ending! Please and thank you!
Terence chapter 31 . 11/29/2023
Just came across this story and consequently your profile. What a damn shame you never completed this story. You have a wonderful writing style and I enjoyed how cleverly you built the chemistry between Gibbs and Tony. Like a True Detective story, law enforcement chase down each lead until it hits the buffers and move on. Then recapping their headway in the investigation and bouncing theories off of each other. Great storytelling.
If you 'have lost the passion' might I please suggest that you entrust the conclusion to another author? Thereby, Fitting the Pieces...
Sincere kindest regards.
HappeeGoLuckee chapter 31 . 8/31/2023
I've long since fallen out of the NCIS fandom, but this fic holds a special place in my heart and I always find myself returning to it. Thank you for sharing it with us
poohbear123 chapter 31 . 3/2/2023
Wish you would update this story
Guest chapter 31 . 2/17/2023
Hope all is well and still alive. Pity you cannot finish this story. I really like it but would like to know how it ends.
Debbie chapter 31 . 2/1/2023
I love this story, but it is not finished. I hate to get so invested in a story and then find out it is not finished. I thought with 31 chapters it would be complete, but imagine my surprise when I get to the end of the 31st chapter and it is not complete. The last time it was updated was February 10, 2015 and look it is now February 3, 2023. Are you ever going to complete this story? From now on I think I will just have to hit one completed stories because I just cannot keep reading ones that are not complete.
Guest chapter 31 . 10/21/2022
Man, this is one of those fics that I can't help check for updates every once in a while, even though it has been years and years. Your dynamics are so well written! :)
Nonny chapter 31 . 9/15/2022
Still in love with this story,years and years after finding an rereading it.
Guest chapter 31 . 4/6/2022
Soooo, there should be more. BEST NCIS I have read…please come bk.

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bevhardie1 chapter 30 . 4/4/2022
Just read this story again, and it's still awesome. I really wish we could find out what happens next...any chance of it ever being completed? If you can't, any chance that you would feel comfortable enough to ask another writer to finish it? This story deserves to be finished.
Melindaleo chapter 31 . 3/18/2022
Bravo! First off, let me say that I never watched this show when it began. I only discovered it fairly recently on Wii TV, but I fell hopelessly in love with the relationship between DiNozzo and Gibbs. So, I found it on Netflix, and I've been binging a bit, but also turned to fanfiction to find what I was specifically looking for - more of this dynamic. I adore stories of how they met, and this one is by far, my favorite. I realize it hasn't been updated in years, and I have no idea if you'll even get this, but I felt you more than deserved the praise.

Now, the story says it's complete - but... it really isn't. I'm at a loss as to how you stopped without the finale, but I'm hoping if you're reading this, you might let me know what you had planned? I know there was still something coming between Mallace (great name!) and Lillith. I'm not going to beg for you to continue, but if you wouldn't mind just sharing your thoughts, I'd LOVE to hear them.

Even so, I feel you more than earned the praise and kudos for such a wonderful, entertaining and all-around good read. You had me both laughing and crying at various points - and that's not easy to do. Well done!
Rosemoor chapter 31 . 3/16/2022
I always love a competent Tony and that's how you have written him here. I hope that you plan to finish this sometime, but since you haven't update since 2019 I'm not sure if you will. It would be a shame if you didn't.
Twistie Tie chapter 31 . 2/9/2022
I love your telling of these two 3 gibbs and tony bond will always be my favorite to go back to! Its really a shame they didnt get more screen time together towards the end of tony's time on the show. Lol now all I have are these fanfics! I would love love love to read the end of this series
Lorrie chapter 31 . 1/23/2022
Just enjoyed your story so far but is there any hope you will finish?
Catherine Firemancer chapter 31 . 1/17/2022
Hi, i return often to this story as I love your characterizations, scene-setting and story building. I hope that you are well in these strange covid times and would love if one day you can return to this work. Life often gets in the way, and know we followers will happily wait for life to allow you time and space.

Take care
Cxx
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