Reviews for Shots of Life
Purestrongpoem chapter 4 . 6/5/2012
In chapter 1, Gavner is not the type of person to complentate on saving his friends or finishing the mission to have a higher ranking. In chapter 2, Annie never knew that Darren was a half vampire and they don't have phones in vampire mountain. I feel sorry for the young boy. The story is nicely done.
Lady Purl chapter 1 . 6/8/2011
chap 1:

This is lovely

the battle u have described is done brilliantly so bravo!

keep writing! and be sure to check out my fan fic!

lov m

xxx
SUSHIxMONSTER chapter 4 . 5/30/2011
Aww, it always makes me kinda sad when someone finds a dead kid on the battlefield D; But really awesome chapter, like always :D
Amela333 chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
These types of things always make me sad, like the ones where they see little dead kids on battlefields and stuff :( But you did a good job with it anyway, and I'm glad you updated this :)
roxypony chapter 4 . 5/27/2011
Awww, I always love a bit of gruff warrior emotion :) good to have ya back!

RXP
SUSHIxMONSTER chapter 3 . 3/20/2011
Awesome idea:D the details were really good:) 'Even in death may you be triumphant' is such a cool but kinda sad saying. I love the ending!
notwisefox chapter 3 . 12/27/2010
Again, I thought the description was very good :) You have to do more! I'm really liking them :D
notwisefox chapter 2 . 12/27/2010
The ending was really sweet :) It was good to see Seba get a little story :D
Amela333 chapter 3 . 12/26/2010
Ah, this one was really good too. I'm not sure if I've ever seen a story where Larten kills his first vampaneze before (maybe I have, but none are coming to mind at almost midnight :P). I thought it was done well. Loving the lots of updates from you!
roxypony chapter 3 . 12/26/2010
Ahh I loved this one! Great characterization - going back to the first kill, so much like Darren's first time! I love seeing the younger inexperienced Larten. As usual, great work :)

*Roxxy,
Amela333 chapter 2 . 12/26/2010
Wow, that was really, really sad. I thought Seba's little realization at the end was beautifully philosophical (see, you can be philosophical!).

And just wondering, have you read Darren Shan's 'Procession of the Dead', from The City Trilogy? Only 'cause the beginning reminded me a little of that :) If you haven't, you should, it was great!
Amela333 chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Great story idea! I thought this one was really good, one of your best! The description of the fight, of everything, was really great. Looking forward to seeing who you decide to write about next :)
roxypony chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Wow CC! This was terriffic! I love battle stories, suprisingly we don't see that many. I liked all the rivalry and emotions, AND OF COURSE the mention of ARRRROOOWW! Its nice to see a good little Gavner story too of course.

If I haven't mentioned it enough times, good to have ya back :)

*Roxxy,
notwisefox chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
What a great idea! I can't wait to see what you can come up with :D This chapter was brilliant; the description was great, and I think Gavner was very in-character :) I loved it!