Reviews for Gate Builders
Bing Bing 9312 chapter 9 . 11/14/2013
Well, it's been just about two years. I don't suppose your motivation to write has returned? I really liked it. I'm going to follow it just in case you do ever return to it. I wonder, has anyone adopted it? I would love to see this finished. I would offer to do it myself but I know I wouldn't do it justice. Anyway, I know it's been a long time since you abandoned this but I thought I would tell you how much I liked it anyway. It was extremely interesting. If you know of anyone who has adopted this story, would you please message me telling me who? Other than that, feel free to take my compliment and move on.
bill560682 chapter 8 . 6/13/2013
in the 100 days show they found

nanites that controlled aging

would they not be able to give

these to thor and the controller

for it so they could have each

clone live to say a million years

old. that way they could live long

enough to fix the problem with

the cloning? they could then take

any of their people in storage out

and have 10 times if not 100 times

more people and thereby ships to

fight the bugs? also they could

likely spare some people to keep

a closer eye on the snakes as well.

an yes i know they needed to die

so they could give everything they

were in the form of the super ship

to the sgc to fight the ori, but if

there is no vala then there is no

ori to worry about. an the only

reason vala was brought into the

show other then to be mother to

the orisi was to be the one to get

the blame for touching things she

should not. daniel can only do

that so many times before jack

would shoot him in the head or

the general would ground him

from all off world missions.

personally i think it would have

happened by end of season 2 or

end of season 3 at the latest. i

think thore's people need to take

a page from carters play book

and start blowing up suns, if they

can figure out a way to take a sun

from normal to boom in say 1.3

seconds you send in a remote

controlled cargo ship in near the

sun and then drive it right into it.

1.3 seconds later no more

replacators in that solar system.

an yes i know that would wipe out

the ida gallaxy but the

replacators are already doing

that anyway.

as to the show were the tokra are

going to poison the system lords i

think it would be better if the

poison were slow acting and was

airborn as it's form of transfer

from snakehead to snakehead

with a lifespan of 2 years from the

first use. this way every system

lord ends up infecting their

troops and at the end of the 2

years the virus attacks the

snakeheads everywhere killing

them then dies off. if you only

attack the system lords

themselves you are only taking

them out then minor system lords

take their place an even if you

take out all the system lords the

baby snakeheads in the jaffa will

grow up into adult snakeheads

sooner or later so you are only

slowing them down for a

moment. this way everyone of

them are dead an all you need to

do is go planet to planet

collecting the children who have

no baby snakehead in them yet

and have thore's people change

their D.N.A. so they never end up

needing a baby snakehead.

in the show were daniel tells

catherin her long lost boyfriend

may still be alive and the general

chews him out for it i think daniel

should bitch slap him and remind

him who in fact owns the stargate

namely catherin. catherin in the

movie was running the program

not the goverment. so she could

walk in at any time and order the

general to pack up everything.

as far as the ori go the ancients

should have more powerful ships

then them. the reason being what

the ori 'gods' know is limited. if it

was not then they would have

attacked the milky way and ida

gallaxies years ago, until stupid

vala and daniel showed up in the

ori home gallaxy they had no clue

there was other life out there.

which means as far as tech goes

they stopped building better stuff

once they all ascended which

likely happened shortly after the

first ones showed their 'super

god' powers to the rest. so as long

as you keep the fight out of the ori

gallaxy were the ascended ori can

strengthen their troops you can

beat them every time. you figure

the ori ascended 1 million years

ago maybe even as long as 5

million years ago so that is a long

time to come up with new tech.

an when ever you run into a

system lord do not stop to talk

and NEVER shoot his guards first

ALWAYS put a bullet right into the

system lord's head then put 10

more. then kill his guards, then

toss his body into the nearest sun.

as far as the wraith go use

cloaking to hide satilites threw

out the whole galaxy. then use the

idea of the sleep chamber and

holo tech to create remote

controlled ships so you never end

up losing people in fights, all you

lose is ships that can be rebuilt.

you also need to remain hidden to

the wraith till you have enough

ships to do a first strike that can

take out 95% or more of all the

bill560682 chapter 6 . 6/13/2013
now if i was harry i would take pen and paper to hogwarts with me an the second some fool namely snape tossed out my homework because it was not on parchment i would sue his slimey ass.
bill560682 chapter 5 . 6/13/2013
now if i were harry i would put an end to this whole boy-who-lived nonsence right from the start by threatening to sue everyone and anyone who used my name or likeness without my written permission. an i would throw the fame were it should be namely on lily and james potter.
John H. Ristine chapter 7 . 12/22/2012
Second paragraph: word stool used instead of stood
Second paragraph: I like the use of heard as in Harry heard in place of the young man said.
Third paragraph: might better give an example rather than slow down the reader with what might be expected with the word seemed.
Olaf74 chapter 9 . 8/24/2012
Cant you please change your Mind?
GuardianStarChild chapter 9 . 7/9/2012
I'm sorry to read about your rough life. I can empathize greatly. I love this store and where it appears to be going. Could you email me if someone takes up this story or your notes so i can decide if I finally want to write something. My email is .
Nessa2685 chapter 9 . 6/21/2012
Please, don't stop wrighting this!

It's really good!
forestreject chapter 9 . 3/14/2012
:sighs: And I wanted to know if he meets up with Danny again or atleast stays in contact with him. :pats you on the head: Great beginning.
Jakattk chapter 9 . 1/28/2012
It really is to ad that you discontinued writing this story. While I understand life I would like to point out that it is a very well written story.
Malix2 chapter 9 . 12/21/2011
I'm sad to here this is abandoned as what's been written so far is rather good. Although I think I noticed a good chunk of the first chapter seems ripped out of the book. So far the stargate stuff mentioned is minor. Only really the rings and daniel, oh and the mention of sokar. I have to say, harry/stargate xovers are quickly becoming my favorite kind of fics, unfortunately they seem to almost always get abandoned. I only know of a few that are either complete or still in progress(or at least were updated within the last year.)
Heather Thistle chapter 9 . 12/1/2011
I'm sorry to see this story go. It's really good. I especially liked the interactions between Harry and Daniel and wanted to see more of that. I hope things go well for you in whatever you are moving onto and thank you for at least letting people know that you are abandoning it rather than doing so with out a word like many others have.
BabLe7 chapter 9 . 11/30/2011
well... that sucks. Hope you can bring yourself around to writing again sometime. I always found writing to be a good stress reliever.
Shraikor at school chapter 9 . 11/28/2011

ok now that thats out i can say i understand about RL problems. best of luck with those!
zeichnerinaga chapter 9 . 11/26/2011
i like this story very much, so update soon please
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