|Reviews for How It Should Have Been|
| darkroses24 chapter 29 . 12/10/2013
I cant believe this is where you stopped :)
- First of all , Thank you so much for writing and sharing his amazing fic with us .I am sure this story have a special place in your heart since it has been with you since 2003 . 10y Wow.
- for the most part this has been one of the most amazing fics I have ever read . Yes I had a few problems with it lool .But it got nothing to do with your writitng . you had to keep them in character.
- I understand that you have written Gunn in the last few chapters as co- parent for Connor. and you did manage to show him as a loving character. I already in more then one review complained about Gunn role . My point is : I would understood his role if Connor didnt have a father . But he does . what really brothers me about this , is putting the father ( even though he didnt raise him) in the same place as someone he lived with for 6 month . This doesnt make sense to me . yes Gunn may have some love for Connor .but it will never come close to how much his father loves him . In my opinion the right to spank/swat Connor should have only been to his father .
- Moving on , Its really interesting how you in more than once brought the two sides of arugment for and against spanking . And explaining in more than one time that spanking is not abuse and not the same as beating .
- As much as I would love to read what happens next .I am really worried how sad Angle would be when he realize his son is married and about to have a baby :( And julie really perfect manipulative .she really knows how to get Connor to do what she wants
- and 29 ch . and still no " I love you too dad " loooool will mabye we will say it at the end :)
- There were afew things in this fic that reflect on my own life ( I did say them before but I feel like repeating lol )
- When Angle heard his son say to his girlfriend I love too you . and how sad he was that his son was able to say it to a girl he only met a month .and not once did he say it to him :(
This made think about my life and the world around me .and how It so easy to tell your love interst Or your friend that you love them .Yet you find it so hard to to say it to your own blood . :(
- other thing , when Connor talked about how he wanted a happy family and Juile told him , he sould look into the picture through the father eyes and creat his own happy family . I cant tell you how many times I felt jealous and sad seeing happy family .But I guess what I can look for is my own future happy family :)
again Thank for his fic :)
| darkroses24 chapter 28 . 12/10/2013
wow gald thing are back to normal loool
this ch would have been perfect if it wasnt for Gunn
I hate that guy .
I feel so bad for Angle .I feel like he is broken and lost . and Conner is really being mean to him .I cant believe he havent told him ," I love you " yet :(((
and juile oh God .. just awful
and the worst part Angle is sad that she doesnt like him :( why should he care what that stupid girl think ?!
| darkroses24 chapter 27 . 12/9/2013
Angle is back finally :)
really sweet moments when he hugged connor
although I kind wish Gunn wasnt there .
the spanking of course I hated it :( . But the scene where Julie and Conner where about to have sex and she found his red bottom. was very yummy looool
| darkroses24 chapter 26 . 12/9/2013
needless to say , I dislike this faith person . God
Julie is right . why does everyone seem to want to hit Connor ? why is everyone trying to conttol him ? It just sucks :(
and woe Julie is pregnant ! take about surprises
again poor Connor
| darkroses24 chapter 25 . 12/9/2013
I am still made that Gunn is doing the spanking . I get that you are trying to write him as a loving caring person . But he is not Angle . Still ah
great writing of course
| darkroses24 chapter 24 . 12/9/2013
these chapters without Angle make me sad :(
I can relate to Connor feeling sad and broken when he said ," they were a happy family ."
I really liked Julie telling him that he should look into the picture through the father eyes , and that could be him :) It kind give you hope lool.
other than that poor Connor :( The fact that Gunn had to swat him makes me angry :( But what can you do :(.
| darkroses24 chapter 23 . 12/9/2013
great job :)
poor Conner doesnt seem to get a break .
but did I miss some thing ?! didnt ch 22 ended up with the sun being up and they had killed the monster ?!
| darkroses24 chapter 22 . 12/9/2013
Really surprising and sad ending :( poor Angle
going back to the beginning .this really wasnt an easy chapter to read . I had to pause a few times to take a deep breath .
first of all , the women in this fic are all awful . No really .all they seem to do is cause drama and problems .
starting with Julie , she really went too far . I expected Conner to stop her at some point . but sadly he didnt . and Angle showed a great patience not kicking her out of his house .
I am glad some one finally shut her up .
but I donot like this new girl (I tend to forget names spelling loool ) anyway yes .she did the right thing with julie .
But then she truns around and go yell at Angle of something that is not really her business . I get that she is trying to help , but really get over yourself .
Then for the first time in this fic I really thought Angle was being unfair
when Conner walked into his office clearly upset .she should have kept her mouth shut .it was non of her business and it was really between Angle and Conner .Puls when someone is angery you space not puch .
so, anyway I dont blem Connre for yelling at her .I get that Angel was angry but he was unfair .He could have just told him to shut up or atleast ask the girl to leave . and really 6 swat ?!.I thought what he did was more taking revenge for his love interst as spoose to teaching his son a lesson .
back to the good stuff I am glad Conner finally told his father he loved him :) It was a really nice moment .
going to back the girl I really didnt like the fact that she instead on taking the food to Conner . I mean really have not you done enough ?!
sorry for the long review :) but this is what so great about your story , that it makes think and but yourself in the character shoe looool
| darkroses24 chapter 21 . 12/9/2013
Another wounderful ch :)
This girl Juliy is just being mean and disrespectful . And Angle doesnt have to explain himself to her .
But its Conner fault that he didnt set her straight from the start and told her , she needs to be respectful to his father .
Liked the the nice moment when conner went to apologies to his father .
| darkroses24 chapter 20 . 12/8/2013
aww :)) where is the "I love you too dad " ! coming soon I hope
I kind feel bad for Angel :( he is trying as hard ads he can to be a good father .
Really nice of him to gave conner an option for another punishment ..
I am starting to dislike Julie .she better start being respectful to Angle ..
| darkroses24 chapter 19 . 12/8/2013
wow ( yes I am going to keep saying that Lol )
another great ch
I am kind surprised that conner didnt stand up for Angel , we she told him they should run . He could have said , he is trying to protect me , he loves me .something like that . But I guess poor conner still have some healing to do :(
| darkroses24 chapter 18 . 12/8/2013
wow :) still amazing
My heart skipped a beat , when juli got back to get her book and heard the spanking .
I really liked her line when she told wes ," how could you let this happen ?"
I kind understand thier point that having to spank his son is painful to Angel as well .
and that dude who swatted Conner butt what the hell ?! even if Conner called him " basterad he had no right to do this . and what now everyone in the hotel can discipline Conner whenever they feel like it ?.?!
sorry I am just so mad at the guy ( I am not good with names looool )
juli is such a sweet girl :)
| darkroses24 chapter 16 . 12/8/2013
It really amazing how your fic makes me feel all kinds of emotions :)
but mostly I have a big smile on my face lol .
I really laughed when Angel told his son .he may swat him even if his girlfriend was there looool
and the end so sweet :) when is conner going to say ,"I love you too dad "
| darkroses24 chapter 14 . 12/7/2013
very funny ch :) lots of lines made laugh
sad ending though :(((
| darkroses24 chapter 13 . 12/7/2013
this story keeps getting better :)
poor conner though . its bad enough everyone knows he get spanked , they also hear it :(((