Reviews for The Originals
Delia Winters chapter 33 . 2/10/2014
I am a but confused... I am expecting one plot line and then another takes over and none of them get fully finished. I really like your ideas but you might want to work on the flow more, just a friendly suggestion. :)
DamonSalvatore99 chapter 20 . 2/5/2014
I love your story. I like the idea of Rose and Jasper on Team Bella but I would really like if Emmett to join Team Bella.
Alepxa Pendragon chapter 33 . 12/26/2013
No puedo creer que hayas abandonado esta historia ra muy buena pero entonces la dejas ¡¿POR QUE?! porfavor continuala es genial...besos
MissFictionJunkieUnknown chapter 33 . 12/13/2013
New to this story but as I read it out it didn't make sense first yu said klaus needed there bond to be sealed before they could help him. Then they would be immortal so how did this even work. Then you practically skipped over core details just mentioning them. You killed jules twice. Then the whole first half of this story was about your plan with the cullens and you never returned. I'm sorry I started off likeing this story but now it Is all over the place idk how I feel about it. Good luck to you
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 33 . 12/3/2013
Freaking awesome chapter I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 32 . 12/3/2013
That was a nice chapter I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 31 . 12/3/2013
Fantastic chapter I love it. What is gonna happen next.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 30 . 12/3/2013
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 29 . 12/3/2013
Hm this could get interesting I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 28 . 12/3/2013
Marvelous chapter.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 27 . 12/3/2013
Superb chapter.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 26 . 12/3/2013
What is next I love it.
Matthias Stormcrow chapter 25 . 12/3/2013
Very cool
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Matthias Stormcrow chapter 23 . 12/3/2013
Fantastic chapter I love it. What is next.
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