Reviews for Baby Mine
Mrs.Voldie chapter 2 . 12/8
I'm sorry... Too many grammar mistakes made me lost interest reading the rest... I hope you can find a good editor/beta reader and repost. Good luck!
Guest chapter 19 . 11/24
very good but to short
occasional chapter 19 . 3/28
hi miss D Zambini dont even know if you are gonna read this seeing its 2017 now and all but i just hope that you didnt give up on writting. your story was sooooooo amazing i couldnt stop after i started reading it. it captivated me in ways i cant even describe it had all the making of a great novel. you are truly gifted and i sincerely hope that the awful comments some may have wont stop you but push you to write even more wonderful pieces.
Thank you for this amazing read.
CalieBlack1 chapter 5 . 10/22/2016
I think it's really strange that she was found all broken and they just brushed it off. I can't believe Draco would just push that aside and let her live there like this. You have and amazing plot here, but it could be better worked. Maybe develop better how they became a "family" like this.
I'm sorry about this review, but I really do think you have an amazing plot in your hands and if you don't have some critics, you'll never improve. It would be nice to discuss plot ideias with someone (you can talk to me if you want) and find a good way to tell your story
Guest chapter 19 . 5/19/2016
good but to short
LCB chapter 3 . 2/19/2016
So she doesn't know what happened to her or they just don't talk about it?
LCB chapter 2 . 2/19/2016
Cute kid
LCB chapter 1 . 2/19/2016
Why not tell Harry the truth
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 19 . 1/30/2016
I really enjoyed this story and would have loved to read the sequel but it wasn't finished and I dislike reading unfinished stories. Good job
edwardcullenlover123 chapter 19 . 9/15/2015
Updated soon please. Xx
4thkage chapter 12 . 3/28/2015
poor Taurus...
i felt want to cry bcoz i put myself in Taurus's place...
so heartbreak...
4thkage chapter 7 . 3/27/2015
Daniel is Taurus's son...
ermmm...i dunno what to think...
4thkage chapter 6 . 3/26/2015
who's Daniel father?
i want to know...
hehe...i need to read next chapter...:P
4thkage chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
baby mine?
i think i had read this story before...
but i'm not sure if i had leave a review for it...
i read it again coz i'm not favorite this story...

i will try to read it again..._
Dorawc chapter 18 . 10/5/2014
cool plot but i couldn't be emotionally connected to ur story at all.
and im not sure if you are trying to make us laugh but
'channel' perfume and 'curly' handwriting lol
I think the reason it is hard to connect is perhaps the story is not descriptive enough in the character's emotions-wise.
Also, they are very out of character with little to no development in them throughout the whole story.
The transition between events are awkward and rough which probably adds on to why it is hard to connect to the story
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