That was truly amazing!

Oh, man, this was well done. You do such a good job of showing the progression of their relationship, and with such subtly. And then...slightly less subtly in the last section, and it's beautiful. The ending-right down to the lines you chose for the last paragraph-is perfect. This is definitely now one of my favorite fics I've read for this ship!

This was lovely. I love this tiny little vignettes still showed then perfectly in character and they were great little slices of their lives. Needless to say, I very much enjoyed the final journey. Well done.

Hello,
It's been a long time since I've read a fic so beautiful and so "Roy and Riza". I think it captures their relationship so well and it's also so in character for them both.
Congrats!

So very good.

Wow. Just wow. Absolutely beautiful.

This is wonderful.

SOBBING AT HOW CUTE THIS IS GOSH DARN IT

Lovely, just lovely. Beautifully written, wonderful pace and flow and nicely in character. You captured Roy so well, and the connection between each part flows without any jarring. Just lovely, a rarity and a gem to find here. Thank you for sharing.

This made me very very happy. Just thought I'd let you know. :D

I can't even handle how beautifully you write this pair. Your prose is just so beautiful it hurts. We also have the same headcanon with regards to them it seems like.

I'm assuming the title is a reference to the Cummings poem? Because if so that makes this even more stunningly perfect because that is my favorite poem AND it reminds me of Royai.

I'm your biggest fan, basically.

Ah I love so many things about this fic :)

The most is the running theme of the counterpoint throughout this, I thought it was very fitting. I also love the scenes you have, of Roy and Riza and their progression through the years together.

I hope you write more fics like this!

I loved this. You really captured the momments and their emotions very well. I liked the third story the best, the one they are in Resembool. The subtleness of their relationship is just perfect there. I also loved the theme itself, travels, very original. 3

I kept reading and thinking 'Oh, this is the best' 'No that one is!' and in the end I couldn't figure out witch I liked most xD

Really great fic

Though I don't know when the 5th part happens, or if just made it up yourself...

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i'm speechless. here there's a really piece of art.

well done (: